Dancing the dance of our own crazy beat.
I used to feel like I've been swept off my feet.
But now I can't see where we go from here.
I don’t know any more if to fear.
It’s foggy this night
Before this used to bring me delight
But now, only fright
But if too much fear
You might see tear
Strengthening my grip, my hands are sweaty
For loosing you makes me nervous and achy
I close my eyes and grasp for my life
Feeling like my body is wrapped in strife
should i send it or no ?
thats how i feel now
what do you think of the poem ?
2007-01-13 12:35:00 · 6 answers · asked by Nick723 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Please, don't send it. It needs lots of work. Not trying to be a hater, honest.
2007-01-16 14:16:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
DO NOT SEND IT
it sounds creepy stalker like no offense intended
2007-01-13 20:45:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds sad not happy so no no no nonononononononono
2007-01-13 20:39:18 · answer #3 · answered by hoplessly_in_love 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!
And I am not trying to be funny.
2007-01-13 20:39:18 · answer #4 · answered by tedajo3901 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
send it, she'll love it, i do!
2007-01-13 20:39:24 · answer #5 · answered by courtney 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO NO NO NO NO...
2007-01-13 20:43:03 · answer #6 · answered by yaya 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋