i wrote these poems about and ex-girlfriend i want to get back with. what do u think?
Past Memories
i miss the days
when we laughed and we played
i would go to your house
and you'd sneak out like a mouse
we went for long walks
and we had some great talks
i did everything that i could do
just so i could spend time with you
i walked you home day after day
but i never could find the right things to say
i tried and i tried but i came up empty
so i gave up the game and asked u simply
i was afraid i was gonna get dissed
but with u i shared my first kiss
long ago we were best friends
but all of a sudden that came to an end
i put another girl first in my ranking
and because of her i changed my whole way of thinking
but even with her i was thinking of you
and at those times i didn't know what to do
i looked into your eyes but you didn't notice
i wanted to tell u but u couldn't know this
cause friends is what we and that's just what we'll stay
unless we get back together some day.
2007-01-12 13:00:09 · 43 answers · asked by curious 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i have mixed feelings about it. i started out reading it as its ok, its ok, its good, its ok, ok stop it's boring. too long in my opinion. as my english teacher says, the power of poetry is the ability to express much in few words. however, it probably will mean more to her since this is about your experiences together. personally, i like the lines:
was afraid i was gonna get dissed
but with u i shared my first kiss
long ago we were best friends
but all of a sudden that came to an end
i put another girl first in my ranking
and because of her i changed my whole way of thinking
but even with her i was thinking of you
and at those times i didn't know what to do
i don't like the lines:
i miss the days
and
cause friends is what we and that's just what we'll stay
unless we get back together some day.
your reading and loving, and all of the sudden its like WHAT? THATS what this is all about? but it could work opposite and be like awwww, your right. so, it depends on the girl
2007-01-12 13:08:16 · answer #1 · answered by Spearfish 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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They might realize they need you and come crawling back!
If you do get back together, don't let the same issues that destroyed your relationship crop up again. Have a good, long talk about how you're both going to make it right this time.
2015-01-28 11:51:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow thats great man...I really liked it. Excpet for near the end "i wanted to tell u but u couldn't know this
cause friends is what we and that's just what we'll stay
unless we get back together some day." ....Cause friends is what we and ?? That doesn't make any sence and confuses the poem a lilttle bit.. rework that part and it will be much better.
2007-01-12 13:08:45 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow did you write this? its lovely! for probaly most types of personalities. i dont mean to be rude to the ladies here, but i think the female side is usually the one who wants to get back in a relationship. Another thing i would also like to notify is that when one side tries to aproach the other more. That "other" would care less about you. Sorry i'm a bit off topic the poem is very lovely.
2007-01-12 13:06:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1st one has some rhythm... would favor to revise it and observe in case you'll get it to bypass more suitable constructive. i love it even as there is the surprising replace from "you grabbed my heart gently, then the subsequent minute it grow to be yanked". the 2d poem is tremendous, No meter or rhythm so it truly is not any longer that giant. sounds like you're writing about a boy. (determined, a lot?) ~sig~ 7 days with out football makes one weak
2016-10-30 23:14:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The guys will think it is lame and all the girls will think it is sweet. What it comes down to is once she reads it, what will you say? Did you break up for reasons YOU caused? An apology is great in the form of a sweet poem, but your behavior is what she'll see day to day.
2007-01-12 13:05:36 · answer #6 · answered by She Devil 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um...it needs a little work. If you really want to get back with this girl. Don't reflect back. You need to romance her...go for the heart and soul of your being. Reflecting on memories is like an elegy. Just a tip. ; )
2007-01-12 13:03:36 · answer #7 · answered by Chistiaŋ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-01-12 13:02:07 · answer #8 · answered by Shayna 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is great why don't you send her a copy and she will melt. I love the way your heart just pours out in it. This could be a good future for you.
2007-01-12 13:14:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Applause is inside of us. And from a far away place,
deep inside of me i give a wide applause to you.
It ain't the words, it is the feeling in the poem,
the love you feel,
Hermoso, Belisimo, beautiful...
God bless ur love.
Good luck principito.
2007-01-12 13:07:49 · answer #10 · answered by NA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋