Some grammar mistakes? Is there correct words order?

Question

What is the Orthodox Church attitude and your personally to a
philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche?
I am a new to the Orthodox world. There is much not clear to
my heart still. I do not know, whether correctly have I started my
spiritual education? I started studing philosophy. I read a number of philosophers, some of them were boring like a landscape behind my window, some were deeper. A well-known philosopher Friedrich Nietzschehas caused spiritual response inside of me. It is his well-known writing -"The Antichrist". There are much seemed to me to be close to the truth. Forgive me, that I dare to state SUCH here but how the Orthodox Church and you personally consider this philosopher? And why? I feel admiration to his personallity a lot. The most likely to my initial sight, because
of his closeness to Christ with his sincerity and that he bore the cross of a terrestrial damnation with dignity. It would be very
important to me to learn your opinion. It is the unique really intere

Answer 1

What is the Orthodox Church attitude and your personally to a
philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche?

--> What is the Orthodox Church's attitude and your personal attitude to philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche?

I am a new to the Orthodox world.

I am new to the Orthodox world. (sounds unusual but not wrong)

There is much not clear to
my heart still.

There is still much that is not clear to my heart. (or maybe in my heart--another unusual turn of phrase)


I do not know, whether correctly have I started my
spiritual education?

I do not know whether I have started my
spiritual education correctly. (no ? because it's an imbedded question)

I started studing philosophy.

studying

I read a number of philosophers, some of them were boring like a landscape behind my window, some were deeper.

I would break this into two sentences: I read a number of philosophers. Some... Either a colon : or a semi-colon ; would work as well.


A well-known philosopher Friedrich Nietzschehas caused spiritual response inside of me.

You can either say "The well-known philosopher FN"or just "Well-known philosopher FN". If you want the "A" you can put a comma after "philosopher" (and optionally one after Nietzsche) or say "A well-known philosopher CALLED FN". I have listed them in order of my own preference.

has caused (maybe "has brought about" would be better) A spiritual response IN me.


It is his well-known writing -"The Antichrist".

It's not clear what "it" refers back to. Maybe "In particular, his well-known writing "The Antichrist" caused/brought about this response."


There are much seemed to me to be close to the truth.

Much of what he wrote there seemed to me to be close to the truth.


Forgive me, that I dare to state SUCH here but how the Orthodox Church and you personally consider this philosopher?

Forgive me, that I dare to state (do you mean ASK? Or are you referring back to what you stated, that you felt a spiritual response) such a thing here, but how DOES the Orthodox Church, and how do you personally regard (not ideal , but better than consider) this philosopher?



And why? I feel admiration to his personallity a lot.

I admire his personality sounds better


The most likely to my initial sight, because
of his closeness to Christ with his sincerity and that he bore the cross of a terrestrial damnation with dignity.

This I don't understand.

It would be very
important to me to learn your opinion.

perfect

It is the unique really intere
incomplete