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Question

Hey. I was wondering, does anyone know a really good poem (that rhymes) about being afraid of the dark? thanx!

After all
The pointless fights
And all the times
I cried at night
And all the cuts
That made me bleed
And heartache that
You've brought to me
And all the times
That I have cried
And all the pain
I've felt inside
I hope that you
Will one day see
You still mean more
Than life to me...
But sence you've had
some second thoughts,
Forget all my
"Forget-Me-Nots"
And break my heart
Again once more
I'll hide the pain
Just like before

~I wrote this one....tell me what you think

Answer 1

Your words are nice

here is a song by IronMaiden called fear of the dark it is great


I am a man who walks alone
And when I'm walking a dark road
At night or strolling through the park

When the light begins to change
I sometimes feel a little strange
A little anxious when it's dark

Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a constant fear that something's
always near
Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a phobia that someone's
always there

Have you run your fingers down
the wall
And have you felt your neck skin crawl
When you're searching for the light?
Sometimes when you're scared
to take a look
At the corner of the room
You've sensed that something's
watching you

Have you ever been alone at night
Thought you heard footsteps behind
And turned around and no one's there?
And as you quicken up your pace
You find it hard to look again
Because you're sure there's
someone there

Watching horror films the night before
Debating witches and folklore
The unknown troubles on your mind
Maybe your mind is playing tricks
You sense, and suddenly eyes fix
On dancing shadows from behind

Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have constant fear that something's
always near
Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a phobia that someone's
always there

When I'm walking a dark road
I am a man who walks alone

Answer 2

i dont know any, however i could whip one up fro you...

im affraid of the dark,
it aint a walk in the park.
I get so scared
i feel impaired.
I can't walk or talk, when in the shadow,
I pee my pants when i hear a howl.
I shiver when i hear a noise,
It totally distroys my beutiful poise.
I really get scared when everyone's gone,
I better hurry and turn the lights on.


hope you liek it :P good luck on finding one!!
luv anthony

Answer 3

Scottish oldie:

From ghoulies and ghosties
And long-leggety beasties
And things that go bump in the night
God Lord, deliver us

Answer 4

Unlike today's garbage, I really like it! It fulfills both requirements of real poetry: rhythm and rhyme!!