No more time 2 spend wit u, to talk to,you to hug u, wat am i 2 do?
Everyines n da way now, ur at work anyhow, wit no mo time to spin wit me but on yo spare timw,as we do thing different, u begin 2 smile again, we start to laugh, den da time starts 2 pass, no mo time again, i try to stay calm, and then it dawns, i cant hide it , i try so hard, but u hav to choose, me or her, and then i knew it , no mo time again
2007-01-09 10:40:31 · 10 answers · asked by princez 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Dude, Of Course! But you know what would be better make that into a song! Seriously!Do it!
2007-01-09 10:47:08 · answer #1 · answered by TomBoy 360 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its o-k. It would be much better if you expressed it in actual English language! What is with this illiterate way you younger kids want to express yourself anyway? Makes you guys sound like un educated fools.
2007-01-09 10:45:48 · answer #2 · answered by vmaxer85 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is pretty good but your spelling sucks.
2007-01-09 10:45:43 · answer #3 · answered by Havana Brown 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sure it's a very nice poem...a little hard to understand, but I'm not your age... so great!
2007-01-09 10:48:07 · answer #4 · answered by laura k 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
kind of confusing ... it goes back and forth i think which is confusing and i think you should spell everything right, that'd be better.... sorry i'm like a big critic, i'll stop talking now lol =]
2007-01-09 10:48:02 · answer #5 · answered by mackenzie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I Like IT!!
2007-01-09 10:44:28 · answer #6 · answered by iloveyoubaby! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good actually
2007-01-09 10:43:33 · answer #7 · answered by teeeeeen. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
smart chick !!!
2007-01-09 10:45:48 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sucked!
2007-01-09 10:44:22 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it... :)
2007-01-09 10:43:36 · answer #10 · answered by ~♥Jade♥~ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋