I kept awaiting for all my life for you.
Even though I didn't know your existence.
(I'm a foreigner.
I'm exercising how to composition)
Are these sentence grammatically correct?
2007-01-07 18:48:42 · 6 answers · asked by Iamman 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
"Awaiting" is used inappropriately here and "know your existence" should be "know of your existence" (in other words, "know you existed").
You can restructure the sentence several ways:
* I kept waiting for you for all my life, even though I didn't know OF your existence.
* Although I didn't know of your existence, I kept waiting for all my life for you.
You can replace "know of your existence" with "know you existed".
"Awaiting" does not usually appear after another verb, but after a noun. Examples:
* A contract awaiting a signature (the contract is waiting to be signed by someone).
* Death awaits us all in the end (everyone waits for death because they know they'll die eventually).
* A busy day awaits me tomorrow (I'm waiting for tomorrow because I know it will be a busy day).
2007-01-07 20:01:50 · answer #1 · answered by Companion Wulf 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I kept awaiting for all my life for you.
Correction: I kept waiting for you all of my life
Even though I didn't know your existence.
Correction: Even though I didn't know of your existence.
2007-01-08 02:53:24 · answer #2 · answered by MyPreshus 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i kept waiting all my life for you.
even though i didnt know of you existence (or i didnt know you existed).
2007-01-08 02:51:28 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is really one sentence not two.
Even though I didn't know you existed I waited my whole life for you.
2007-01-08 03:01:36 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I get email like that all the time. lol I swear it reads like spam mail from Russia. lol
2007-01-08 02:52:25 · answer #5 · answered by animatelifeforce 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Amen..Whatever it is...
thanks for the points mate
2007-01-08 02:56:55 · answer #6 · answered by AlisonJonshon 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋