Just Wanted to know what people THOUGHT About My Poems!!?

Question

I wrote these a while back, but I have two publised Just wanted to know for girls mostly how would you feel if a guy wrote this for you then posted it on the net for everyone to know how much You love the person? thanks!! Here are the links "I... The Dreamer http://www.voicesnet.com/teenpoems/poempoetry68422.htm
and Polaris http://www.voicesnet.org/poetrydisplay.aspx?poemid=102088

Thank For The Comments In Advance!

Answer 1

i enjoyed the first one , a lil long winded for my taste but i have a short attention span so :P