A Reason to Live
I go to bed at night, and I wait for sleep.
I wonder what I've done in life, and what I will reap.
If I were to die write now, what would people think of me?
Would I be loved? Would I be missed? What would my life be?
I remember as a child, my mom would tell a story
About a little baby boy from heaven, who gave his life for me.
And I konw he was important, he had a reason to live.
His life had a purpose, he had something to give.
And as sleep comes near, in the darkness I see
That I live for him, because he died for me.
2007-01-05 10:26:47 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Dude this sucks....
2007-01-05 10:29:14 · answer #1 · answered by skanksta 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I love the last line, it is truly beautiful!!!!! It makes so much sense, its incredible. Thanks for the poem, I'm always going to remember that last line, when you write something like that, you should know that so long as you keep writing from where that came from, you'll always affect the people who read it, and they'll always remember your work. Peace!
2007-01-05 18:31:24 · answer #2 · answered by Bedam 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Write brief so the idea shines through.
Don't tell everything.Learn the art of selective fantasy.Work more on writing poems.
2007-01-05 18:30:31 · answer #3 · answered by uncoolmom 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is beatiful I love it. You should keep that to yourself to tell you the truth. I am a christmas baby so God Bless You and your words to others. That poem will travel and help others in need of salvation.
2007-01-05 18:30:23 · answer #4 · answered by piedpiperpo3 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Beautiful!
You should hear a song by Nicole Nordeman "I wanna leave a legacy"
2007-01-05 18:30:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You spelled "right" as "write". Sorry, that just annoys me. I can't help it! Otherwise it is a good poem about your Jesus.
-Seeker
2007-01-05 18:30:31 · answer #6 · answered by Seeker 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Who knows you may became a famous poet.
2007-01-05 18:30:44 · answer #7 · answered by pepsiolic 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bad.
if your only reason to live is because of religion and what you THINK a character within that religion did for you....then you dont deserve life. that may sound harsh but i beleive that.
were here for a short amount of time and then thats it....youre telling me youre content with groveling the whole time?
i couldnt do that. and if you can...and you think your heaven is real....then do it. and when you findits not....and you find youre all out of time....well.....iltold you so.
so BAD POEM.
you need to reexamine why youre here.
2007-01-05 18:28:01 · answer #8 · answered by johnny_zondo 6 · 1⤊ 3⤋
"If I were to die RIGHT now" -- spelling error.
It sounds nice, but the subject matter is "meh."
2007-01-05 18:29:50 · answer #9 · answered by ChooseRealityPLEASE 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you were to die,i write the word NOW.honestly it sucks...
2007-01-05 18:30:19 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem was okay, didn't really turn me on, but flowed nicely.
2007-01-05 18:36:06 · answer #11 · answered by larbonix 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋