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Why is it that your all i think of?
The one thats in my mind 24/7
Why is it that my dreams are so much sweeter?
With you in them
Why is it that when i close my eyes your all i see?
Your beautiful face and smile
Why is it that i can stop thinking about your lips?
Those kisses you gave me
Why is it that your name is always in my head?
That name that i will never forget
Why is it that i feel this way?
Is this what they call love?

2007-01-05 05:43:29 · 8 answers · asked by jenny x 1 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

8 answers

It's beautiful! You can tell it came from your heart and it's about someone very special! I've written a couple of those myself!! A+

2007-01-05 05:45:34 · answer #1 · answered by geminiqtpie22 5 · 0 0

Sounds like something a bored adolescent wrote in a black and white journal after downing a triple latte.

2007-01-05 13:46:36 · answer #2 · answered by Blind Sighted 3 · 0 0

the poem was very sweet I know someone will feel very special if you give this to them keep up the good work

2007-01-05 13:56:05 · answer #3 · answered by katie 4 · 0 0

Cute, but too many questions. You want a poem, not a poll.

2007-01-05 13:45:48 · answer #4 · answered by INDRAG? 6 · 0 0

I could feel your emotins through it. Well done.
I think it would be even better if you corrected the incorrect words and spelling.
BArk.

2007-01-05 13:53:11 · answer #5 · answered by Bullwinkle 4 · 0 0

Really nice poem...

You should make a collection of poems like that!!!

2007-01-05 13:46:35 · answer #6 · answered by Becca 4 · 0 0

not bad..
but had trouble reading it
why is it that?

2007-01-05 13:46:40 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

it`s sweet.

2007-01-05 13:45:55 · answer #8 · answered by CHIKA 3 · 0 0

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