Native English Speakers, would you mind to improve this paragraph to a more creative style.?

Question

I woke up in the morning catching the sun almost in the middle of its way when I saw my sister just came back home preparing for her trip going to New York. Surprisingly, I received money from her saying that this was her gift for me. I was very grateful when she approached getting it from wallet thinking that I could go to the mall watching Casino Royale. Consuming no time, I immediately took a bath and clothed myself. My sister told me to ride on with her since she was also taking the way going to the mall. When we arrived in the mall, I unloaded saying goodbye to my sister.

Answer 1

I woke up with wood this morning, must have been some dream. As I looked out the window I caught a glimpse of the sun as it slowly but surely strode across the pretty blue sky. After putting on my clothes I made my way downstairs when I saw my sister. She had just come back home from an all nighter and was preparing for her trip to New York, the Big Apple. Much to my surprise she reached into mom's purse and gave me a wad of money, saying that this was her gift to me, and not to tell mom, or dad, or anyone. I was very grateful, thinking to myself I could go to the mall and watch Casino Royale, and if I had time, maybe take in a peep show on the way home. Wasting no time, I immediately took a bath, making sure to wash my anus and genital area thoroughly and then proceeded to have a shower to rinse off the filth that sticks to you from a bath. Next I clothed myself, once again making sure to put my best g string on properly. Not backwards like the last time. Once I was clean and dressed, g string on properly, my sister told me I could snag a ride with her to the mall, but that I would have to give her some of the money she just gave to me, for gas. When we arrived at the mall, she kicked me out of the car and took the rest of the money leaving me stranded, no Casino Royale, no peep show, no nothing. I hate my sister.

Answer 2

As I woke up in the morning just before noon, I saw my sister, who had just returned home from preparing for her trip to New York. To my surprise, she approached me, took out her wallet, and gave me a gift of some money. I was very grateful, because I realized I could use it to go see Casino Royale at the movie theater in the mall. Wasting no time, I immediately took a bath and got dressed. My sister, who was also going to the mall, gave me a ride. Once we arrived there, I said good bye to my sister and went on my way.

Answer 3

The sun was almost up when I awoke. My sister just came home and was preparing for a trip to New York. She gave some money to me, much to my surprise, and explained that it is her gift to me. I was very grateful for her gift and thought about spending the money to watch Casino Royale at the mall theatre. I immediately rushed to take a bath and get dressed. My sister told me that she will take me to the mall since it is on her way. I told my sister goodbye as I unloaded at the mall.

Answer 4

I woke mid morning, when I noticed my sister, she was packing for her trip to New York, I was surprised when she gave me some money , she said it was a gift. I was very pleased and though that I would head off to the mall to see Casino Royale. I washed and got dressed quickly, my sister said I could catch a ride with her as the Mall was on her way. At the mall I got out and said goodbye.

Answer 5

Waking up in the morning, with the sun half-way up, I realized my sister had returned home and in preparation for her trip to New York; she surprised me with gift money she had for me. I felt grateful thinking I'll go watch "Casino Royale" in the mall, and so, in no time, I bathed and clothed myself. My sister and I went together, since I was going her way, to the mall. We parted and said our "goodbyes" when we arrived there.

Answer 6

Woke up, got out of bed, dragged a comb across my head, made my way downstairs and saw my sister, and looking up, I realized she was packing to go to the city that never sleeps... She gave me some cash. Boy I was in shock. She said it was a pre-sent, it was for me, it was my own I could do what I want--it's up to me to make the choice. I don't care too much for money, but money can buy me Bond. Can buy Boooond, I'll go to the new show. Can buy me Boooond, I'll see Casino Royale. I took no time, to have a bath, I washed myself and I put clothes on my back. My sister said, she'd drive me there, she said it was on her way anyhow. We got to the mall--we got to the mall--watched Casino Royale cause we got to the mall pretty soon. So I said Goodbye, Farewell, Adios and Adieu to my sister.

Answer 7

I woke up in the morning, and catching sight of the sun knew it to be nearly noon. My sister was home, and preparing for her upcoming trip to New York. I was disappointed to see her go, but pleasantly surpised when she presented me with a gift; money. I immediately began to think of what I could do with it, and was very grateful at my sister's gesture. My sister invited me to go with her to the mall, and I agreed. When we arrived, I was overwhelmed with sadness at seeing my sister go.

Ah that wasn't very good...

Answer 8

Do YOU talk 6 languages? it truly is truly unusual, yet i in my opinion recognize dozens of interior sight English audio device who also talk a minimum of two, typically 3, different languages, which contain French, German, Italian, Russian, Thai, Cantonese, Mandarin and Turkish. i'm a community English speaker who also speaks French, Russian and German, and would study Latin and Italian. Will that do?

Answer 9

whatever,remember to use spell check