His blues were bright
On that dark night
He said listen to me
And dont cop a plea
You were going to fast
With your foot on the gas
You need to go slow
And stay in your row
He looked me down
I gave him a frown
I stood up straight
Big mistake
He said a ticket for you
All dressed in blue
I said look at my face
I'll plead my case
Sir, I was in need
For that great speed
I was trying to pass
That dumb freaking ***
2007-01-02 22:55:07 · 3 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Well except for that last word, It was okay... I'll give you a 7/10..
2007-01-03 05:22:34 · answer #1 · answered by FAswimmerST 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was funny. Check your grammar and spelling and i think you've got an amusing bit of work. Nothing so original or amazing as to ever be published, but funny.
2007-01-03 20:14:42 · answer #2 · answered by Brento! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting... 6/10.
By the way, in the second stanza, first line, it should be "You were going too fast."
2007-01-03 13:48:13 · answer #3 · answered by zzilly14 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋