what do you think of it i guess it's the best one i've wrote yet
those days
well i miss the days when it was elvis,the rolling stones and fleetwod mac
the day's when everybody roamed the streets without worry
it was bellbottom's and a-track tapes
well i miss those days when everything was good
we had women,the perfect song on and the sun always shined
god how i miss those days
i miss the days when it was haggard,jones and hank jr.
the days when you love and live freely
when it was big hair and paraschute pants
well i miss those days when everything was sweet
we had love,a van and there were always blue skies
god how i miss those days
now there's computers,hybrid cars and a trip to mars
well i miss the days when everything was good
we had women,the perfect song on and the sun always shined
god how i miss,oh how i miss the those days
those days
oh those days.
2006-12-30 17:02:26 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i didn't mean it the way it sounded with the women it said i miss the days when we had women that's us when we had women writing this song was like telling the world when we were on top of it.
2006-12-30 17:09:26 · update #1
I think it's great I like the touch of realism and how it is captured. Good Work
2006-12-30 17:09:10 · answer #1 · answered by L.Sincere 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the simplicity of the words..a song doesn't have to be full of highfalutin words to be good, and the meaning all depends on whose listening. It would be better if we could hear it ofcourse :) Just a few comments though. I agree with the women part. It's misleading. and I think you use the past tense "shine" if you mean that you polished something. Shone would be more appropriate. Also, bellbottom's shouldn't have an apostrophe and paraschute shouldn't have the S.Sorry its all grammatical... also, what do you mean by the line on computers, hybrid cars, etc. does that mean that those things are negative for you? In what way? Hope I helped...:)
2006-12-30 17:29:16 · answer #2 · answered by Tsina 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8/10
2006-12-30 17:07:03 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics need to rhyme.
Like this.....
I miss the days when it was haggard jones and hank jr
the days when you could love and live freely
when it was big hair parachute pants cigarettes and a cooler......heeeeeee heeeeeeee
2006-12-30 17:24:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I miss the days in people wrote good songs
2006-12-30 17:07:34 · answer #5 · answered by Marissa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good song I can swear I've heard something like it in the past though, get a good beat with it maybe tweek a few things around and it'll be really good.
2016-05-22 22:56:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sucks a mean, mean dick.
I miss the days where people could write songs that were worth a ****.
2006-12-30 17:05:32 · answer #7 · answered by detective_dulllight 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked your song, why dont you send it in a see if someone would record it and make you some money.
2006-12-30 17:13:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What do you mean by "you miss those days we had women"???!!!
2006-12-30 17:05:35 · answer #9 · answered by †Alessandra† 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think you need to stop listing to darrly worrley when you write songs
2006-12-30 17:06:32 · answer #10 · answered by noeller96 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋