I have another poem for my true love:
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you,
My sweet pea...
Natalie.
2006-12-30 14:33:34 · 11 answers · asked by Jessica - AKA - Carolina Girl 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
that's so sweet.
i would remove the word 'and' from the sixth line (it detracts from the repetition and rhythm), but other than that it's excellent.
2007-01-02 12:31:09 · answer #1 · answered by willowprincess 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so sweet, thoughtful, and such a beautiful thing to say to someone. Good Luck.
2006-12-30 14:45:30 · answer #2 · answered by ♥♥Bree♥♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep that's sweet.
2006-12-30 14:36:02 · answer #3 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwww this is so weird, but so so sweetâ¥
hopefully your not the millionth account of Action C.
2006-12-30 14:35:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You got it bad hon
2006-12-30 14:36:34 · answer #5 · answered by Charisma 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is so beautiful keep up the work
2006-12-30 14:36:04 · answer #6 · answered by babykatdream099 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
send us more poems
2006-12-30 14:46:16 · answer #7 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aawwee its very sweet...
2006-12-30 14:38:18 · answer #8 · answered by Dharshi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*sniffle sniffle that is so sad BUT SWEET
2006-12-30 14:37:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its sweet ^_^
2006-12-30 14:35:30 · answer #10 · answered by Saphire Aurora 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋