I wrote a poem. It's for a person from P&S. I am truly in love with them. They don't know me ... but I am in love. I will give some hints:
- They have a blue picture
- The picture is of a girl
And here is the poem to that person I wub:
A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
2006-12-30 14:21:17 · 22 answers · asked by Jessica - AKA - Carolina Girl 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
YES ... NATALIE ... IT IS FOR YOU MY LOVE!
2006-12-30 14:25:01 · update #1
Natalie ... the poem IS for you. I wub you so much!
2006-12-30 14:26:10 · update #2
i love the symbolism of the thread repairing itself. your imagery is beautiful. the love you describe here is so deep, instead of the fleeting passion that is so often descriped in poetry. i love it.
2007-01-02 12:11:36 · answer #1 · answered by willowprincess 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
With words like wub for love it seem a bit immature.
2006-12-30 22:25:40 · answer #2 · answered by zeroartmac 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's worthy of Hallmark. But you need to work on lines six and ten, to get that rhythm happening.
On second thoughts, don't bother. It's crap.
Cocoon - Womb?
2006-12-30 22:29:50 · answer #3 · answered by Dr Know It All 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's a very cool poem. I wish that someone would write something like that for me.
2006-12-30 22:24:46 · answer #4 · answered by Marenight 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow! Such a great and beautiful poem. It is so sweet and cute.
2006-12-30 22:26:48 · answer #5 · answered by ♥♥Bree♥♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow - I'm impressed; great poem! Keep writing!
2006-12-30 22:23:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i'm not keen on the words 'Its fingers spread' so close to the word 'womb' from the first verse.
2006-12-30 22:30:08 · answer #7 · answered by jesus 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u and i have a lot in common
we write nice poetry
i think it is really creative
2006-12-30 22:24:19 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was a beautiful poem.
2006-12-30 22:23:35 · answer #9 · answered by Bobcat9 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You are talented...you should get that copy written, and see if you could get it published.
2006-12-30 22:24:40 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋