Help me check if there are any grammar mistakes. Thankyou.
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My house is located in Taipei city; it’s an old but comfortable apartment. There is a park nearby, a post office and also a school. The neighbors here are not only friendly but also they are welling to help others. Here has no crime and no pollution. I know my house is old, but I never thought of moving, because I’m sure that you can’t find another place that is as friendly and decent like ours.
2006-12-30 13:39:51 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
"Welling" should be spelled "willing". I agree that the second comma in the last sentence is not needed.
Great job, good luck!
2006-12-30 13:49:12 · answer #1 · answered by Unknown 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're more competent than most people on this site. :)
I just re wrote a few things to correct the structure.
My home is located in Taipei city; it’s an old but comfortable apartment. There is a park nearby, a post office and also a school. The neighbors here are not only friendly but are willing to help others. We have no crime or pollution. My house is old, but I have never thought of moving because I’m sure that you can’t find another place that is as friendly and decent as ours.
2006-12-30 22:14:10 · answer #2 · answered by Tiff 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My house is located in Taipei city; it’s an old but comfortable apartment. There is a park nearby, a post office and also a school. The neighbors here are not only friendly but also they are welling (WILLING) to help others. (In this town there is) no crime and no pollution. I know my house is old, but I never thought of moving, because I’m sure that you can’t find another place that is as friendly and decent like ours (is).
i have made a couple changes they are in the parentheses
hope i helped
2006-12-30 21:50:28 · answer #3 · answered by mooseguy32 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is the completly corrected version of this paragraph:
My house is located in Taipei city; it’s an old but comfortable apartment. There is a park nearby, a post office and also a school. The neighbors here are not only friendly, they are also wiling to help others. There is no crime and no pollution here. I know my house is old, but I never thought of moving, because I’m sure that you can not find another place that is as friendly and decent as ours.
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2006-12-30 21:55:17 · answer #4 · answered by shenpup 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I live in Taipei City, a city with very little crime and pollution, in an old but comfortable apartment. It is located near a park, close to a post office, and not too far from a school. I have neighbors who are not only friendly, but are also willing others in time of need. I know that my house is old, but I have never thought of moving because I am almost positive that it would be impossible to find another place as friendly and decent as ours.
2006-12-30 21:53:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is a park nearby, a post office *INSERT COMMA* and also a school.
*THERE IS* no crime *OR* pollution *HERE*.
I think the second comma in the last sentence isn't necessary, and may not be gramatical. Not sure why. Good luck with the assignment
2006-12-30 21:44:44 · answer #6 · answered by Matt 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋