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i need you

baby ever since you left everything's been dark and grey
i've been lost and i don't know what to do
sometimes i wonder what we would be now
but i'm dreaming because

**chorus**
you're long gone down that highway
you said goodbye and that you had no more cares
but baby there's one thing i never got to tell you
i need you

i think i will have another drink
try to drown your memory
and till i erase you i will keep these words

you're long gone down that highway
you said goodbye and that you had no more cares
but baby there's one thing i never got to tell you
i need you

this is the end i've learned i can't live without you so i will lay me down but before i go i want the world to know

that she's long gone and never coming back
you left and moved on with your life
and i want the world to know
i need you
i need you
baby i need you

feel free to tell me what you think of this song or what i should change about it.

2006-12-30 13:20:25 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Music

i'm sorry i didn't mean that i was going to kill myself in that part i juist thought i would add something to the song.

2006-12-30 13:51:38 · update #1

8 answers

I really like it!!! It's sad but I think we've all experienced that sadness and can relate to it. I hope you are just taking artistic license though and would never think of ending your life because of losing someone. Because as much as I can relate to losing someone and hurting that bad, it does get better after time passes. But, I digress...I really do like it! Good job!

2006-12-30 13:25:04 · answer #1 · answered by Cyndie 6 · 1 0

I actually liked it. Sounds like you had a drunken spell in the song, and a lot of us have had those moments, over love. It's pretty good stuff. Thumbs Up!



Krazy Libra

2006-12-30 13:23:20 · answer #2 · answered by krazy_libra_from_ac 5 · 1 0

I like it...not so sure I like the word baby in the song but hey that's just me

2006-12-30 13:24:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

umm...are u planning on killing your self? i guess it's okay...i would take out the drinking part though, but thats just me

2006-12-30 13:24:03 · answer #4 · answered by The one and only 3 · 0 0

Well I think that song is OK but i cood have done better. Soz!!!


welllllll that song aint very long and i dont no wat tune ur singing it in but as i slowly reed ur words i found somthing out.

i dont need you at all!!!

2006-12-30 13:23:16 · answer #5 · answered by XxSelinaxX XxNoLastNamexX 1 · 0 1

Very good in my opinnion.

2006-12-30 13:25:41 · answer #6 · answered by killertutu5 2 · 1 0

cool

2006-12-30 13:23:40 · answer #7 · answered by Eat organic stuff 2 · 1 0

hotttt it's gooooooooooood

2006-12-30 13:22:57 · answer #8 · answered by Angelica 2 · 1 0

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