wrote this song this evening and i wanted to know what everyone
thought about it.by the way it's a country/southern rock song
this isin't much because i just wrote it all of a sudden it's called cheatin' kind
cheatin' kind
well my baby used to love me truly
before i went off with some other girl
when i came home one night
i saw the tears in her eyes and she said
**chorus**
you're the cheatin' kind,you'll never love me
so i'm packing up and moving on
but just one more thing before i go you're the cheatin' kind
well one day when i was at home
it him me i was wrong and i should have listened to what she said
and i wish i wasn't
the cheatin' kind,she told me i would never love her
and that she was packing up,shacking up and moving on
so now i know i'm the cheatin' kind
**chorus**
i know it's probaly not that good but what do you think ?
2006-12-30 11:59:42 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Have you a melody in mind?
It could fly. Hell, some of the lyrics I've seen are lousy. Maybe CW would work with this. 3/4 time.
As you write you may find yourself changing a few of the lyrics.
If you need to write the notation, go to,
FinaleNotePad.com
It's staff with piano. FREE download.
2006-12-30 12:14:07 · answer #1 · answered by ed 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I already answered this question.
wow. i wish you had never cheated on her, because then she would have never called you the "cheatin' kind" and you would have never disgraced this planet with such ear-drum-shattering, blood-curdling lyrics. just reading them makes me feel like i went into Alabama, began rolling around in mud, and finished the day off by having a massive orgy with all my relatives. I'm gunna go take a shower and hopefully within the next 15 hours i can wash the stench of that putrid song out of my mangled ears
2006-12-30 12:07:34 · answer #2 · answered by azrstbass311 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The words "You will never love me" should not be there. If a woman has been cheated on, she wouldn't question whether he is going to love her some time in the future; she just loses trust and moves on.
Good song overall.
2006-12-30 12:16:14 · answer #3 · answered by OC 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't mean to put you down or anything, but you do want my honest opinion don't you? I don't really like it that much. I won't give the reasons I think that because I don't want to sound mean, but if you want them just ask.
2006-12-30 12:12:28 · answer #4 · answered by Led*Zep*Babe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, it would be a great country/rock song
1 recommendation- make it longer, one thing i dont like about country is that the songs are way too shot
i like it tho
2006-12-30 12:08:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not bad, it might not be a good move to post it up on here unless you have a copyright, because someone on here might steal your idea.
2006-12-30 12:06:35 · answer #6 · answered by Music_Questions 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋