Does anybody knoe about the TS,CD,CM,CM,CD,CM,CM,CS format for writing please explain i need help for my essay

Question

i knoe TS- Topic Sentence, CD- Concrete Detail, CM- Commentary, CS- Conclusion, but can u guys give me examples of Concrete Details and Commentary because i always get those confused thanks

Answer 1

Here's a page that explains Concrete Details and Commentary.

Topic Sentences: A topic sentence supports the thesis and is a statement that must be proven in the paragraph. (see 2nd link)

Concrete Details: A concrete detail is "stuff" from the story that supports the topic sentence. It can be facts, illustractions, examples, quotes, citations, reference, etc.

Commentary: A commentary sentence is "stuff" from your head. It is the insight, analysis, opinion that relates the concrete detail back to the topic sentence.

Answer 2

If you can prove god exists you alone will change the way the entire world works. Guess what, there isn't a single shred of evidence that shows a god or gods exist. I didn't know writing my thoughts down could cure disease. Now that's impressive. Unifying forces of nature would cause life on Earth to cease. I hope you're joking about eliminating science. Without science there'd be nothing to write on or with. And certainly no Internet to share your ideas.