Thanks for reading..
Sometimes..
Sometimes I don’t know how to react,
That’s why I act the way I act,
Sometimes I seriously don’t know what to do,
That’s why you go through what I make you go through..
Sometimes I react too quick to think you’ll take it bad,
That’s why you’re sad when I make you sad,
Sometimes I don’t realise what I’ve got until it becomes a “had”,
That’s why you’re mad when I make you mad..
Sometimes the slightest things make me feel grey,
That’s why when you have to go, I wish you’d stay
Sometimes I feel that no one cares for me,
That’s why I wish we’d always stay as “we”..
2006-12-30 06:04:50 · 21 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It was written a year or two ago.. It's supposed to be like that..
I'm not sendin it to anyone.. Thanks everyone.. I have more but they're on my pc..
2006-12-30 06:12:41 · update #1
It was jus a simple poem by the way, written in like less than 10 minutes..
2006-12-30 06:34:38 · update #2
Excellent. I write poetry myself, but it's one of those "Whenever - I'm - bored - and - have - nothing - else - to - do" kind of hobbies, lol.
Keep up the good work :) You should save them all :)
2006-12-30 06:07:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
I wrote about 40 Do you like this poem? Don't Quit When things go wrong as they sometimes will;when the road you're trudging seems all uphill; when the funds are low and the debts are high;and you want to smile, but you have to sigh; When care is pressing you down a bit -- Rest if you must but don't you quit. Success is failure turned inside out; the silver tint of clouds of dout ; and you can never tell how close you are; It maybe near when it seems afar. So, stick to the fight wen you're hardest hit-- It's when things go wrong that you mustn't quit
2016-05-22 21:27:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that's so good. You're so lucky you can write like that. I think it's so hard to write poems that make sense, stay on a topic and rhyme.
2006-12-30 06:11:14 · answer #3 · answered by bitterlysweet 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes I like it. You are a good writer. If you wrote that 2 years ago you are good. You should continue to write.
I like to poem.
2006-12-30 09:57:08 · answer #4 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow .... I like this poem...you are talented. It seems you have a problem to share your feelings and that's why ppl don't understand you.
I want to say that you expressed your thoughts very clearly...that's why I think you are talented.
2006-12-30 06:36:21 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Read the poem out loud. The flow is forced, no play with words, and too much I I I I and you you you you, and the last sentence is out of rhythm.
2006-12-30 06:08:11 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
sorry...I think it's terrible. Seriously! The rhyme is very contrived and generally it's a bit too introspective and self indulgent for me.
grey stay....me we......bad sad..... dreadful.
2006-12-30 06:30:41 · answer #7 · answered by mikey 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's pretty good, and if i had a bf it'd make me appreciate him even more cos it makes so much sense.
2006-12-30 06:23:03 · answer #8 · answered by Rubber * Duckie 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you should consider getting some couseling. They have wonderful drugs for depression.
2006-12-30 06:08:37 · answer #9 · answered by CctbOh 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Make 20 more like this and sell them...You've got tallent!
2006-12-30 06:06:41 · answer #10 · answered by sunnysideup 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋