No it doesn't sound right to me.
"He becomes one with the nature" would probably be better as "he becomes one with nature"
"the boys who are destructing" should be "the boys who are destroying"
And it makes no sense to have the word illogical (whichever way you spell it) as a description for the Garden of Eden. Illogical means something that has no logic to it. And something that is logical is usually a series of things that are related to each other, and follow on in a way that makes sense and is predictable.
hope this helps.
2006-12-30 01:37:10
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answer #1
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answered by Star 3
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It has some grammatical errors which I've tried to correct below:
"He becomes one with nature and doesn’t see anything bad on the island; just the boys who are destroying the goodness in the illogical Garden of Eden."
"Illogical" means something that doesn't follow the rules of logic or doesn't make sense.
2006-12-30 09:37:11
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answered by Groucho Returns 5
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This is really weird as the observer is concurring with the destruction of the Garden of Eden because it(the garden) is illogical. Illogical cannot be applied to something tangible such as a garden as its existence is a matter of fact unlike a concept that can be subjected to analysis.
Presumably this would be more logical if the remaining text was displayed.
2006-12-30 10:22:57
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answered by Clive 6
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the nature - should be - nature
jus - should be - just
destructing - should be - destroying
illogical means not logical, but without more context, it's difficult to see how this would apply to the Garden of Eden
2006-12-30 11:40:42
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answer #4
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answered by Anonymous
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illogical–adjective not logical; contrary to or disregardful of the rules of logic; unreasoning: an illogical reply.
2006-12-30 09:40:10
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answered by Cherokee Billie 7
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Ask Mr Spock - he's a logical sort of vulcany chap
2006-12-30 10:46:59
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answered by Sir Nickle Barsteward 3
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Nothing. Sounds like English is not this persons first language.
2006-12-30 09:33:06
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answered by asushigirl6 1
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nothing, illogical means it does not make sense
2006-12-30 09:30:44
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answered by cereal killer 5
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Yup, opposite of logical...
2006-12-30 09:49:35
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answered by kennyd_2000 2
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not logical. if thats what you mean, youve spelled the word two different ways..
2006-12-30 09:31:13
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answered by seg1802 2
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