i wrote thi poem for my girlfriend and she broke up with me
trees grow in the summer
my name is johnny hunter
I used to buy horses
Now i live in a bath tub
will marry me
If not can i finish your cheese sandwich
I need help so help me
does colectable mean its rare or just limited edition
roses and choclate make me think of you
so do wet dog and elmer's glue
give me a ring and I'll tell you why
cause i hate butterfrlys
2006-12-29 17:02:20 · 19 answers · asked by JuliusRomans 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
This sounds a lot like Walt Whitman. I'm calling you out on plagerism. LOL JUST KIDDING!
Poetry IS a way to show love. I hear Donald Trump hires people to write poems for him so people don't see him as a nasty old witch that eats children after accidentally videotaping myself.
2006-12-29 17:09:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
poetry is a way to show love.But still...it depends on how you write the poem and the words you put/write in that poem as well.
What I can say here is that,you should probably do a better poem than this one coz for me,eventhough you may mean love in this poem..it still feels like annoying me esp with these words:
"will marry me
If not can i finish your cheese sandwich" and also "give me a ring and I'll tell you why
cause i hate butterfrlys"
well..i'm just saying~~ ^.-
2006-12-30 01:18:20 · answer #2 · answered by ichigo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry was a way to show love maybe hundred years ago or maybe more. Now the trend is to communicate more directly. When you next catch her just tell her 'I love you' and before she can reply tell her you have two tickets for the premier show (or anyother thing that she loves best, you must research) This has worked just fine for me. The girl showed her appreciation by kissing my cheeks which was her closest. By the way she was a film fan and it was the premier show of her favourite hero. Today I have a second place below her (imaginary) film hero.
Best of Luck
2006-12-30 01:17:19 · answer #3 · answered by wizard of the East 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh gag. I'd break up with a guy that wrote me a poem too. If a guy wrote me a poem (and a few have) it would make me feel icky and I'd be embarrassed for him.
2006-12-30 01:12:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It all depends on the person and the poem. If the person likes poetry then its great but if its not then then you should probably not try. If the poem is good then it will probably work out somehow. Just don't use bad poetry...sorry but that poem was kind cheesy
2006-12-30 01:09:35 · answer #5 · answered by coolkhane 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
HAHAHAHAHA!
That was amazing. I would've laughed my *** off! My boyfriend is constantly making up funny **** like that. I absolutely love poetry. It takes time and if you write a poem for someone that you really care about, then it really shows.
2006-12-30 01:10:09 · answer #6 · answered by JoJoStar 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think it's a wonderful poem.
I would marry you.
I hate betterflies too.
You're not good at spelling.
Collectable can be anything you can collect.
Even cheese sandwhiches.
You should write more poems.
You're very good at it.
2006-12-30 01:09:06 · answer #7 · answered by iamsoboredandtired 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
well dude this is not the best poem to tell a girl read back over it and look what u wrote! sorry i would have broken up with you too
2006-12-30 01:07:46 · answer #8 · answered by ballin221 1 · 1⤊ 2⤋
*tear* It's beautiful--reall beautiful. *sniffle* How could she?! How could she dump you over that?! It's the most precious peice of literature ever written! You rock on, Julius! Go for it with all you've got!
2006-12-30 01:09:54 · answer #9 · answered by jdd's_kitty 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Next time, resort to reciting love poems that have been published.
2006-12-30 01:05:52 · answer #10 · answered by What, what, what?? 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋