Hey, my question comes from the fact that I'm inlove, but that makes me a little bit cheese in some of my poems/songs, so I would really want your opinions. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING.
I think I love you
But how should I know
All I know is that without you
My life doesn't flow
My guess comes from thinking
That life is just too short
but being around you
Just seems to make time float
By the way you hug me
makes me hear your heart
and last time I heard
We were both beating as one
It might sound Crazy
but I love you for who you are not
which is being fake, shallow, bad,
and not all the things you are
You had me at hello!
I had you at what's up!
Even though, you knew
I wasn't ready for all that
you like no other man
respected me
feelings, body and mind
2006-12-29 16:01:23 · 6 answers · asked by Latina Hottie! W.Chocolate 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Guao, that is a very good one!.
I like it "very much".. and i congratulate you...
it has that.. "good rhyme"...
We would say in spanish ..." Me quito el sombrero"...
Bonito ...
2006-12-29 16:07:32 · answer #1 · answered by NA 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
err. it rhymes.
it's pretty good. I like how you broke off the lines, and the rhythm of the poem in it's entirety.
2006-12-29 16:04:28 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Let me see you in lingerie,and I MIGHT answer(=
2006-12-29 16:04:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
good job and keep at it! :)
P.S. you're awfully brave for putting it on here lol
2006-12-29 16:04:46 · answer #4 · answered by Qmd86 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
you stole that from don juan
2006-12-29 16:03:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
its ok
2006-12-29 16:04:00 · answer #6 · answered by Heyhey 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋