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Hi, I just wrote this, any opinions, ideas to improve it. Please, I hope you like it, oh It isn't finished yet.

I think I love you
But how should I know
All I know is that without you
My life doesn't go on
My guess comes from thinking
That life is just too short
but being around you
Just seems to make time float
By the way you hug me
makes me hear your heart
and last time I heard
We were both parts of one

It might sound Crazy
but I love you for who you are not
which is being fake, shallow, bad,
and not all the things you are
You had me at hello!
I had you at what's up!
Even though you knew
I wasn't ready for all that
..........

Not finished
Sorry...

2006-12-29 15:21:06 · 1 answers · asked by Latina Hottie! W.Chocolate 2 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

1 answers

It sounds good so far, i cant wait till its done.

2006-12-29 15:27:57 · answer #1 · answered by INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS 5 · 1 1

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