When I leave my house, and I start to rome,
I'll be looking for my true home.
And I'll start down that path, full of shame,
And I'll wonder if anything will ever be the same.
And not long after when the jouney will start,
There will come a time when the roads will part.
One side will lead to happiness, the other to sin.
And I'll be dreading the answer on which one will pull me in.
So I'll stand right where I am, surrounded by night,
When from afar will come a bright light.
And I'll follow the light, for the light shows the way.
And the light will bring joy to my ever day.
And the bring me to my true home,
And I will be happy, no more will I rome.
2006-12-29 08:48:39 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
On 2nd to last line i meant And the light.
2006-12-29 09:03:08 · update #1
I think there is a great deal of spiritual depth to your poem.I like it .You should try to have it published.If your young and you really composed this yourself I think you are mature beyond your years.If your older, I still think it shows a great deal of spiritual maturity.
Your True home I hope is Christ,I know that is where I abide,and always will.
2006-12-29 09:03:20 · answer #1 · answered by EveretteDavid 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a lovely poem. You need to change the spelling of rome to roam, though:}
2006-12-29 16:52:40 · answer #2 · answered by leslie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, I love your poem. Did you author the poem? It is very uplifting and leaves me with a warm feeling. Thank You for sharing.
2006-12-29 16:53:58 · answer #3 · answered by sunshinesue_1999 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
'Tis a pretty nice poem. You might want to do something about the "rome",but other wise it is pretty.
Thank you for sharing!
2006-12-29 16:52:58 · answer #4 · answered by Myaloo 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think your poem is heartfelt and many of us can relate to it. But keep your day job.
2006-12-29 16:54:41 · answer #5 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't get it. Sin is happiness.
"Good are the passive that obey reason. Evil are the active springing from energy."
"Energy is eternal delight."
"God will punish those for following his energies."
God hate's me because I'm happy
2006-12-29 16:52:43 · answer #6 · answered by Ghost Wolf 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very nice if the light you are referring to is Heaven. Its spelled roam though sweetie.
2006-12-29 16:52:17 · answer #7 · answered by Angela F 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think the writer or the copier should learn spelling first.
2006-12-29 16:54:52 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
not bad but the second to last line should not be and the bring the ''the'' does not sound right.
2006-12-29 16:52:18 · answer #9 · answered by Mim 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
when in rome do as the romans do.
2006-12-29 16:53:01 · answer #10 · answered by DO YOU KNOW WHERE GARY IS? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋