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In villages, we can find strong women working as stone breakers and sand diggers and carrying the stones and sand to their yard, while weak men work as kite makers. In cities, besides male lifters, we can also find female lifters. On the contrary, there are also men who are as *graceful* as female dancers.
2006-12-28 03:05:54 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Yes, this is correct English.
2006-12-28 03:07:48 · answer #1 · answered by harpertara 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sure. Dancers are usually very graceful. They can also be strong, athletic, talented...it really depends on what you are trying to say about these men. Are you trying to emphasize the fact that dancing is something you consider (or you think your reader considers) to be a "female" profession and the men are just as capable of doing it as the women? Or are you trying to focus on the athleticism of both sexes?
2006-12-28 11:09:53 · answer #2 · answered by leaptad 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It works.
2006-12-28 11:08:03 · answer #3 · answered by Phoenix, Wise Guru 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I minored in English in college and it sounds good to me!
2006-12-28 11:13:55 · answer #4 · answered by kiki 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep! I think you're good.
2006-12-28 11:07:55 · answer #5 · answered by Rachel M 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think "gracefully " would be more outstanding.
2006-12-28 11:09:30 · answer #6 · answered by maria fkun 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋