I don’t remember the day you said you loved me and I knew it was true.
I don’t remember the day everything changed and we were no longer coo.
I don’t remember the day...
I don’t remember... what I was going to say.
I don’t think things will ever be or can ever be the same
because of what I do remember.
I remember,
my heart recalls .
If I could say I’m over it its not 100% true
because I have a place in my heart just for you.
Like best friends the days when we stuck together
gorilla glue.
Thinking of this changes my what was mellow yellow to blue
"Time goes by, life goes on and all I can think about it why you’re gone."
When I try to say I don’t care
I really do because certain situations just weren’t fair.
Reconstruction failed because old feelings linger there.
If I see you with another girl I wonder who is she to you?
She can’t be another me but
I guess he’ll have to wait and see.
No matter how well I hide the facts and try to act
I don’t care....I don’t care..I don’t care
in the back of my mind...
Resentment ...yea her...she lives there.
2006-12-27 15:04:30 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
it was ok
2006-12-27 15:06:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
well it is kinda ok but how long did it take to write this. it kinda sounds like you just threw some words together but it is good.not the worst i have heard but not the best either....just being honest
2006-12-27 23:08:17 · answer #2 · answered by laci 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, and it's very brave of you to come on here and spill your guts out on here. *clapping* on a scale of 1-10, I give it an 8. :) Keep writing. :)
2006-12-27 23:09:37 · answer #3 · answered by Qmd86 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A good effort
2006-12-27 23:06:43 · answer #4 · answered by evertalall 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its verry good! get a shovel and bury your resentment now and move on. ;)
2006-12-27 23:11:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2006-12-27 23:06:25 · answer #6 · answered by amoxi7 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a beautiful poem.
2006-12-27 23:06:54 · answer #7 · answered by Queen of Scream Fan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! You're very talented.
2006-12-27 23:07:59 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-12-27 23:06:17 · answer #9 · answered by Sexy-C 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its ok at the end
2006-12-27 23:07:37 · answer #10 · answered by ☺ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea its good
2006-12-27 23:09:08 · answer #11 · answered by summer girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋