You once were a boy
Who played with his toy
Now you’re a man
In foreign land
You’re off to Iraq
We all want you back
Tour number two
What more can you do
So proudly we wave
At all of the brave
We love you so
We want you to know
And in my own mind
I know you are kind
They just see you
Hardened like glue
I’ll be here when
We meet up again
And if you’re set free
Eternity
Love Dad
2006-12-27 01:07:06 · 14 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Politics & Government ➔ Military
10
Thanks. For everything.
2006-12-27 02:17:48 · answer #1 · answered by My world 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
A definite 10.
2006-12-27 09:44:09 · answer #2 · answered by marge8710 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I would give it an 8.. just because the second line "played with his toy" sounds a little off-color.. if you change it to "played with toys" I'd give it a 9.
2006-12-29 20:07:32 · answer #3 · answered by 34andlivingwithmomanddad 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
God Bless. I'll give it a 9 also.
You need to do whatever helps you get through this time. If it helps, I thank you for your sacrifices.
2006-12-27 09:15:38 · answer #4 · answered by illusions 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
not bad, as far as my opinion probably 5 or 6 but if your sending it to your boy. It shouldnt matter Im sure he will love it.
2006-12-27 11:20:24 · answer #5 · answered by striderknight2000 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10.
Your continuous show of love will give him the power to keep it up and fight with a brave heart.
2006-12-27 15:47:22 · answer #6 · answered by ColdWarrior 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I appreciate the thought and love that went behind this and I'm sure the recipient will love it too... but as far as poetry goes it is doggerel (really bad poetry) about a 1.5.
2006-12-27 11:43:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I would personally like to thank you and your son for the sacifices you are making for our country.
8
2006-12-27 09:13:06 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
the poem itself - 2
the meaning - 10
2006-12-27 09:30:20 · answer #9 · answered by crazy_willy_7 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
9 sounds pretty good to me
2006-12-27 09:10:06 · answer #10 · answered by armywifes3lb 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋