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Unstable Fable

An unstable fable is what I’m about to tell
Living in different places combined called Hell
An unstable fable is the place I call home
Surrounded by those intoxicated by the Drill Sergeant Syndrome
This fable is where I am enslaved
Constantly having my dreams repaved
An unstable place where my dreams are suppressed
A location where my true aspirations won’t be addressed
My life is this unstable fable that I prate about
Wondering would it be better if I suddenly blacked out
Submerged in a world where they really don’t care
Ignoring and dismissing the burdens I bear
Engulfed in a zone where being outspoken is not condoned
Fighting back the saltwater tears that I should not own
Held down by the burden of the being the only male in the house
Yet she still thinks I should be quieter than a mouse
Sorry to let her know but this fable is about to end
Venturing towards my dreams, I must ascend
Ignoring her opinions, or rather her demands

2006-12-26 08:16:59 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Other - Education

2 answers

It rhymes. It's good. I understand the sentiment exactly and think we have all been there at one time or another. Good job!

2006-12-26 13:41:18 · answer #1 · answered by honiebyrd 4 · 0 0

od job on the poem it sounds really good. now keep it up and put your talent to good use.

2006-12-28 03:36:36 · answer #2 · answered by Kim 2 · 0 0

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