I wanna show this poem to the girl i lik, can u guyz or girls tell me if this is good
roses are red violets are blue, your eyes
are beautiful just like you
when i first saw you
i saw true luv
when i started to talk to you
i saw endless luv
when i come back from a hard day
i just think think of you and
you make me smile away
i never felt this way before until i saw you
and all im trying to say
is that i love you
2006-12-26 06:55:58 · 10 answers · asked by C T 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
yeah its good enough to steal mwa ha ha ha ha no really its pretty good
2006-12-26 07:04:08 · answer #1 · answered by anonymous 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YECCH!!! It would take a very special girl to not vomit all over the paper. Hint: Don't start a serious poem with "Roses are red Violets are " anything!!
2006-12-26 07:04:39 · answer #2 · answered by Ralph the Sage 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
roses are red violets are blue
a bit more original thought
these words are not true
this poem is all for naught
2006-12-26 07:58:59 · answer #3 · answered by It's been awhile 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww, thats a sweet poem, you should give it to the person you wrote it for
2006-12-26 06:59:52 · answer #4 · answered by Ray8l 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is sooo cute! If you gave me that poem I would so fall for you!I really like it!
2006-12-26 07:06:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ohhhhhhhhh how cute who every dats 4 u should give it 2 them its realy cutie
2006-12-26 07:00:12 · answer #6 · answered by puppygurlbrat 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if thats truely how you feel then go for it ..dont say things to a girl that you truely do not mean,so if its true ...go for it
2006-12-26 07:00:35 · answer #7 · answered by tori g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you like her you might not wann use love. other than that its good, simple but good!
2006-12-26 07:18:31 · answer #8 · answered by LC 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya i think its sweet. i'd like for my guy to write me somethin like that!!!!
2006-12-29 12:26:16 · answer #9 · answered by maddie m 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really nice, you should give it to her
2006-12-26 06:57:53 · answer #10 · answered by triste_girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋