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-- The kingdom is not in the sky nay the caves of the earth or deep within the sea. The Kingdom of God is within you and outside of you, all things that has life within it belongs to the Kingdom of God. Look up on the skys as it moves and gaze with awe as the creation of God is the Kingdom.
Pure joy and happines be unto you all!!!
In jesus name
2006-12-25 18:45:07 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
I think it is pretty and warm and encouraging. 7.9
2006-12-25 18:48:26 · answer #1 · answered by wehweh 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your 1st sentence ("The kingdom IS NOT in the sky...") and third sentence ("Look up on the skys...as the creation of God IS the Kingdom") contradict each other.
Also, you spelled "skys" wrong... it is: "skies".
Also, you need to get a good resource book, or access a good WEB site, on proper grammar and punctuation usage...
"...all things that HAS life" should be "...all things that HAVE life", because it is a plural subject, not singular.
There should be a comma after "moves" so that there is no confusion with the verb "gaze" as referring to the subject "skies" when you intend it for the "unmentioned reader".
Also, "Jesus" should be capitalized, because it is a name.
I rate your poetic piece at a "2".
My advice... increase your reading of literature and poetic prose, and keep writing.
2006-12-26 03:02:19 · answer #2 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-12-26 15:23:39 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
10 Very Good.
2006-12-26 02:54:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
10
reminds me of the Gospel of St Thomas......
2006-12-26 02:48:24 · answer #5 · answered by WitchTwo 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
9.8--important message
2006-12-26 02:51:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Thank you.
2006-12-26 02:47:49 · answer #7 · answered by Gorgeoustxwoman2013 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋