Please correct the following sentences in a professional manner.Thanks a alot?

Question

Dear fellow citizens,
Congratulations on the seminar of one of the shining stars of humanitarian society, a great philosopher, "Person's Name" and the new year of 2007.
Kouchani art society would be honoured to accept all your art orders.

Answer 1

Dear Fellow Citizens,

Best wishes for the new year 2007, which is being marked by the seminar of one of the leading lights of humanitarian society, the great philosopher [ ].

The Kouchani Art Society remains at your service and will be delighted to attend to all your art orders.

Answer 2

Dear fellow citizens,
Congratulations on the seminar of one of the shining stars of humanitarian society, a great philosopher, "Person's Name" .
Happy New Year 2007. Kouchani art society would be honoured to accept all your art orders.
Short sentences sound better and are less confusing.

Answer 3

Dear fellows,
On the seminar of one of the shining stars of humanitarian society, lets all Congratulate the great philosopher, "Person's Name", and Happy New Year.
In addition to this occasion; Kouchani art society would be honored to recognize all your art orders.

Answer 4

I think it's ok, it sounds good to me. the only thing that confuses me is the first sentence congratulations......and the new year of 2007. It's kind of alot of thing to congratulate on.
Congratulations on the seminar of one of the shining stars of humanitarian society, also for a great philosopher, a "persons Name" and for the new year of 2007!
That sounds a little better to me, but then again I am not a genius in grammar.

Answer 5

I'm not sure what you are trying to say... Got any more info?

Answer 6

Or I'll have to pay someone to do it...