Can u help me with my English pls?

Question

I need to write a message to the company about admission assistant position
but my English is not good enough.
This company is a very big foundation and English language school and they r looking for some one who can supply them students from Asia
My advantages are
I’m from former soviet country i can easily communicate to all soviet countries in Russian
And I aware of the culture of this countries which may help me
and i also speak Turkish which is the 2nd spoken language in these countries an I also have good connections in these countries which I made in my pervious visits to soviet countries
So I need to write a proper short letter to them an mention all of these in it
Can u pls me with that I would be very obliged to you
Thanks in advance
(Related answers pls)

Answer 1

I hope this is useful... good luck

To start, if you dont know the person´s surname you put: Dear sir/madam,
If you know his or her surname you put: Dear (surname),

You continue with the reasons why you are writing
for example: I am replying to your advertisement in (the name of the newspaper or place where they put the advertisment) for the position of assistant.

The second paragraph must be abput your qualifications.. you can start with something like this:
As you will see from the encloused application, I am form former Soviet country (and so on).. Never put something that could be a negative point for you... if the english language is a problem to you, just dont mention it.. emphasize on the good thing, like you speaking turkish

In the third paragraph talk about your experience.

And finally, you give an ending.. with something like: I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely, (your name and surname)

Now i will give you a letter complete so that you can appreciate the formal language, the structure and the use of complete sentences.

here goes the complete
adress of the company your adress

Dear Madam,
I saw your advertisement in "The New York Times" on Saturday 15 April, and I would like to apply for the position of assistant.
I am 25 years old and I have lived in England for 10 years. I am very good at relating with young people. I can speak spanish, french and english.
I have worked recently on an assurance company as a managers secretary. I left the job because I wanted something different aspiring on my personal goals.
I look forward to hearing from you. I would be most grateful if you could send me more details about the job itself.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Rice

I am from Argentina and i have learnt this at school
Bye

Answer 2

Admission Assitant Position
My advantages are :
I’m from a former Soviet country and I can easily communicate with all Soviet countries in Russian
I am familiar with the cultures of this countries.
I also speak Turkish, which is the second spoken language in these countries, and I also have good connections in these countries, which I made in previous visits.
Just a few small changes, your English is very good.

Answer 3

Why bother applying if your English is not good enough. If we help you and you got the job are you going to come on here all the time asking for our help because you cannot read or write proper English. You are under qualified for the job. You would do better enrolling yourself into English classes and when you can speak our language properly then you will be more competent when you apply for our jobs. Sorry to be so blunt but there are too many immigrants taking our jobs for less money and they are often not qualified. This is most annoying to people who have studied hard to achieve their goals only to find out their prospects of employment in their own country are reduced by cheap unqualified immigrant labour, that somehow managed to get a job with the help of people on Yahoo Answers.

Answer 4

Look on the web. Good luck

Answer 5

try the website...businessballs.com...excellent models of letters like the one you mention you need to write...good luck!!

Answer 6

No go back to where you came from and stay there

Answer 7

try www.englishforums.com/ - 88k

Answer 8

forget it get it, get a job as a taxi driver

Answer 9

huh?