I wait now every morning,
every day,
for your voice,
your call
your smile,
your hand
your eyes...
Waiting for the phone to ring,
I realize
how hard
I hope
for a reason
an excuse,
a wow,
a game,
an anything,
a joke,
a song,
a ring...
I wait
and then
I hear
your voice
at last...
I smile...
I fly,
I sing!
2006-12-21 08:03:45 · 6 answers · asked by hazelshine 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Wow, that gets right to the heart of it. Sounds like a love song...I think it's very good...Two thumbs up!
2006-12-21 08:08:18 · answer #1 · answered by Pam C 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its alright
Though how did you get it to go under jokes and riddles
I would give it a 8 and a half out of 10.
Keep up the good work!
2006-12-21 16:09:55 · answer #2 · answered by sweet pea 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's sweet, but so high school. Dig deeper and find what you truly want to write.
2006-12-21 16:21:57 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Amanda♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I quite like it, esp. the structure of the shape. Did you write it?
2006-12-21 16:07:33 · answer #4 · answered by Smee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HOW PRETTY WHY WOULD ANY ONE TAKE THIS AS A JOKE!
2006-12-21 16:07:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
aww i love it
2006-12-21 16:07:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋