when i come to the end of the road,and the sun has set for me
i want no rites in a gloom filled room
why cry for a soul set free
miss me a little but not for long,and not with your head bowed low
remember the love we once shared
miss me but let me go
for this is a journey we all must take
and each must go alone
its all a part of the master plan
a step on the road to home
when you are lonely and sick of heart
go to the friends we know
and bury your sorrows in doing good deeds
miss me but let me go
2006-12-20 12:59:28 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Your poem is very beautiful. It made me cry. My husband has terminal cancer, and he is not well right now, and I know that the description in your poem is very much how I will soon need to see him. I know I have to let him go.
2006-12-20 13:03:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ann D - if you read this, could you please tell me which book of poetry this is in by Helen Steiner Rice?
And if it was plagiarized, Linz172, I think that is totally disgusting!
Really wonderful poem. Beautiful flow and terrific sentiment. I especially liked:
and bury your sorrows in doing good deeds
miss me but let me go
Your friend would be so honoured to know you had written this and I am sorry for your loss.
2006-12-20 13:07:17 · answer #2 · answered by rileysmile 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was very touching. Writing is a release for you and you are very good at it. Your friend was lucky to have known you and i'm sure he knew this. You may want to consider entering this in the poetry contest on poetry.com. It's free and is an excellent way to share your writing with the world.
2006-12-20 13:13:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it relatively is a huge poem. only one element, do no longer modern that on the funeral through fact it quite is style of to descriptive in case you already know what I mean. Funeral poems are okay to grant to the family members if it describes the the way that person lived, truthfully.
2016-10-15 08:30:21 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Memorable, but the question should read ...my friend who passed away. This was written by Helen Steiner Rice.
2006-12-21 13:47:11 · answer #5 · answered by Ann D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
want me to be honest?
It's touching! But no matter what poem you wrote to your friend, I think he/she would be pleased no matter what since you care about them greatly.
2006-12-20 13:01:45 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very touching. God Bless.
2006-12-20 13:02:02 · answer #7 · answered by robert m 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it!...I hope you don't mind...but I think I would like to save it...It really is lovely.
2006-12-20 13:01:32 · answer #8 · answered by ticklemeblue 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
what a touching poem
2006-12-20 13:09:03 · answer #9 · answered by amber f 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i luv it!! im going to save it!! i luv poems and i luv reading them
2006-12-20 13:06:42 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋