HELP!!! please check my sentence!!!?

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what we have now is simply a grateful heart....

2006-12-20 03:12:43 · 5 answers · asked by nana 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

What we have now is simply a grateful heart....

No misspellings, good punctuation, nice adjective (simply), this is a perfect sentence!

2006-12-20 03:19:51 · answer #1 · answered by No, You. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Perfect.

2006-12-20 03:14:54 · answer #2 · answered by supersonic332003 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

remove the word simply

2006-12-20 03:16:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

Sound good!

2006-12-20 03:29:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

IT'S RIGHT! WHAT IS BOTHERING YOU IN IT?

2006-12-20 03:30:08 · answer #5 · answered by Stella 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋