Its kinda short....
Of all words spoken
the few heard
are a wandering wave
of the vast ocean
striking against the shore
leaving a transient impression
washed away
by the next wave
to come
ashore
2006-12-19 21:25:47 · 11 answers · asked by Cornesan 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I really did write it. I'm quite suprised at your comments.
2006-12-20 22:13:45 · update #1
Great piece! memorable lines! excellent rhythm. I guess its a good comment about the adage: people "hear" but don't "listen!" kinda remarkable piece of counsel for the headstrong! The image of wave for words is strikingly apt and rich due to the alliterative "w" in few, words, wandering, washed, away. Indeed, one senses the transient loss of wise words as if they've taken off on wings!! Wonderful poem.
2006-12-19 22:23:34 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
All the words spoken
Are but the ripples on the shores
Of the ocean of life;
The best are those unspoken
As deep as the depth of the ocean;
Where life in myriad forms thrive,
In a world unknown to babbles.
2006-12-20 05:31:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thats nice!
2006-12-20 07:12:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!! That's really, really good. Did you make that up yourself? Mind if I write it down and show it to my friend? She really likes poetry.
2006-12-20 09:09:25 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sweat! Really! It reminded of something in the past! Thank you!
2006-12-20 05:29:23 · answer #5 · answered by Roubini 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it, especially the meaning. If it's yours, keep it up! If it's not, you might want to mention the author somewhere.
:^)
Have a nice day!
2006-12-20 05:28:36 · answer #6 · answered by [A] 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice ..if u wrote it zen keep it up buddy
2006-12-21 05:52:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
absolutely wonderful. even i write poems and so i know that is a real masterpiece.
2006-12-21 00:38:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
short n sweet
2006-12-20 06:29:11 · answer #9 · answered by namesake 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! Its really good....did you write it???
2006-12-20 05:28:19 · answer #10 · answered by Lynne 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋