My ex broke up with me and i wrote this rap song 4 her. Tell me what ya think: I remember that time I saw u waiting in line.Couldnt help myself and check out your behind.I know what I say is kind of corny.With one look at u made me so horny.I waited my chance to say my line”May I dance with u?”and you said “fine” Later on we went to the bar for a drink and I got you # so later we could link.As we got to know each other through the phone,I wish I could have u closer to home.I took a few flights to spend a few nights to have u in my sights.As time passed on, I moved to T.O. becuz I wanted to c u a lot mo.In the past year we lost some of that fire.The same routines can make a relationship tired.I know we need to be able to change to be together becuz without some work nothin lasts 4 ever.What makes it worth it is the love that we have.And to c that end it would be real sad.
2006-12-19 19:03:36 · 14 answers · asked by J Z 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Well noone else likes it but i think its catchy and i read it and thought take out abreviated words it ment something so cant hurt to try good luck
2006-12-19 22:10:29 · answer #1 · answered by adelaidegm 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't know what u did to her to need a second chance but as long as u didn't abuse her then i believe everyone deserves a second chance. On the other hand - if she does not want u or does not love u then a second chance is not worth the while. U cannot make someone love u no matter how hard u try or how much u want them to. Writing a song for her is real nice but it won't make her love you.
2006-12-20 03:09:05 · answer #2 · answered by Tequila Sheila SA 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's a nice song, but a sad one actually. That is so true, everything seems so perfect at the beginning, but everything always seems to end up the same way. I don't know why that is, serious....good things never last....like u said before...life is about paying bills and making money....and nowadays all people look for is sex...which is worse (i think)....Sometimes I feel like it use to be easier 20 years ago..when no one or nothing was "insane"
2006-12-20 03:12:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its quite ungentlemanly song or rap song to wrote for a girl you have got a relationship back then,but try to think of something that she would really appreciate and love to hear from you, just bear in mind that a girl's feelings is so sensitive that must a guy would always remember.
if i would be the one you wrote a song like that sorry but i think that's cruel.
2006-12-20 04:01:44 · answer #4 · answered by rosette 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day Job.
She doesn't want a rap song like that.
She would like a romantic song and then maybe think about it.
I wouldn't give you the time of day with that song.
Sorry
2006-12-20 03:07:58 · answer #5 · answered by Stephie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I want the 30 seconds I spent reading this back
2006-12-20 03:33:06 · answer #6 · answered by jay m 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you made a rap song for me, I would slam the door in your face. Talk to her sincerely. If you rapped all those lame lyrics to her, u won't stand a chance.
2006-12-20 03:07:30 · answer #7 · answered by jaded 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
if it was me you would have to come up with more than just wanting my body for SE*it sounds like u only have 1 thing in mind that ain't love that's lust
2006-12-20 03:14:09 · answer #8 · answered by purple_puma 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW! you have talent and that's really good.
that said, would it make a girl go back to her man....no
gernerally women don't appreciate rap talent, which u got!
2006-12-20 03:09:06 · answer #9 · answered by thank you come again 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sorry, It didn't keep my interest. I couldn't concentrate long enough to read the whole thing.
Sorry
2006-12-20 03:27:41 · answer #10 · answered by clcalifornia 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋