Would you walk with me, Jesus
On a sandy beach for two?
I'll say I love you jesus,
and you'll say you love me too!
We'll lay together jesus,
We'll play together like were ten,
and when the sun goes down
We'll wish this never ends
*Drums start*
Jesus, Jesus, Jesus
You are my life
When you were hangin on that cross
I couldn't help but cry
Now my nights will be so lonely,
without you there beside me
I used go commando
but now i'll sleep in my nighty.
:) Christians how do you like it? It sounds great in real life, but do you think the lyrics show devotion for jesus? I know you havn't heard it in real life, but based on the lyrics do you think you would buy this CD?
God bless. Praise jesus.
2006-12-19 14:39:34 · 23 answers · asked by Poo 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
South park? WTF...that is not from SP. Only half the first stanza is. >_< I love jesus..and south park isn't funny for makin fun of him.
2006-12-19 14:44:21 · update #1
hahaha that episode was on last night...so funny.
2006-12-19 14:46:41 · update #2
Elvis Costello was once asked what he thought of the group Boston. He replied that they were a bunch of eunichs that didn't understand that Rock&Roll was about anger and sex.
Christian Rock is an oxymoron.
As for your song, the meter is off.
2006-12-19 15:26:15 · answer #1 · answered by Ranto 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are some lines in here that I'm not comfortable with.
"We'll lay together Jesus" (sounds like a sexual connotation)
"I used to go commando but now I'll sleep in my nighty" (what type of nighty does a guy wear???) and what does going commando have to do with Jesus.
I would seriously recommend changing those lines. Otherwise, if it is from your heart and is about your agape (not erotic) love for Jesus than go for it (after changing those lines).
2006-12-19 14:47:10 · answer #2 · answered by Searcher 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
To be honest it need quite a bit of work sorry.
We'll lay together jesus, sounds (a little sexual in nature)
I used go commando ?
but now i'll sleep in my nighty. Don't understand this part at all.
Sorry
2006-12-19 14:46:24 · answer #3 · answered by dianehaggart 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Maybe the i used to go commando isnt so appropriate for a CHristian song. as well yeah its good. but i mean it makes Jesus seem like a girlfriend. but hey brother good job nonetheless sing ur hearts content to glorify God.
2006-12-19 14:43:32 · answer #4 · answered by Vinny Sacco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Could you work in the lyrics "Whenever I see Jesus up on that cross, I can't help but think that it looks kind of hot"?
2006-12-20 05:57:00 · answer #5 · answered by Paul 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wouldn't, sorry. I don't want to hear about you going commando and Jesus's name in the same song. It's kinda disrespectful, don't you think?
2006-12-19 16:00:29 · answer #6 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seriously....I feel that it doesnt have the impact...you could refer to songs like Casting Crowns...Listen to the songs that they have composed...Maybe could give you some ideals on how to write a better songs...=)
2006-12-19 14:51:47 · answer #7 · answered by lovejoanjy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How long did it take you to right down those lyrics from SOUTH PARK?
2006-12-19 14:43:09 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Jesus i love you so
i cant let you go
i need you to guide me
so put your love inside me.
2006-12-19 14:46:00 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
haha, i like the last stanza....
why would you sleep in your nighty after he left though? lol, commando is the best.
period.
=)
2006-12-19 14:41:55 · answer #10 · answered by lizardgirl12368 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋