Please, I would like someone to check my English (2)?

Question

11.Notify your superior prior to leaving your workplace.
(You have to change the bathroom slippers before going into the bathroom.)
(After using them, be sure to disinfect them with alcohol.)
　　　　
12.You need permission to enter other areas.
(Through accidents prevention and secret information leaks.)

13.Notify your superior and receive his approval prior to your going away.

14.Do not change the clothes or do return preparation before the chimes ring.
(After the chimes ring, put your affairs in order and go back.)

15.When you leave the workplace, greet your superiors and co-workers.
(Put your private clothes on at the dressing-room until go home. Getting home wearing workplace clothes is not permitted.)
(Do check out procedures using the timecard located at the employees’ entrance.)
(Only smoke at the designated location.)

16.In case of injury or upset, notice your superior and follow his indications.
(Never make an arbitrary decision.)

Answer 1

13.Notify your superior and receive his approval prior to your going away.

This would sound better as "Notify your superior and receive his approval prior to leaving."




(Put your workplace clothes on at the dressing-room until go home. Getting home wearing workplace clothes is not permitted.)
(Follow check out procedures using the timecard located at the employees’ entrance.)
(Only smoke at the designated location.)

This should say "(Leave your street clothes in the dressing room until it's time to go home. Wearing your uniform home is not permitted)."

The rest sounded fine! Good job!

Answer 2

Correction:

11.Notify your superiors prior to leaving your workplace.
(You have to change the bathroom slippers before going into the bathroom.)
(After using them, be sure to disinfect them with alcohol.)
　　　　
12.You need permission to enter other areas.
(Through accident prevention and secret information leaks.)

13.Notify your superiors and receive their approval prior to your going away.

14.Do not change the clothes or return preparation before the chimes ring.
(After the chimes ring, put your affairs in order and go back.)

15.When you leave the workplace, greet your superiors and co-workers.
(Change into your private clothes in the dressing-room before you go home. Wearing your work uniforms at home is not permitted.)
(Use the timecard located at the employees’ entrance to punch in or out.)
(Only smoke at the designated location.)

16.In case of injury or upset, notify your superior and follow their instructions.
(Never make an arbitrary decision.)

Answer 3

It all looks good,except #16,change the word notice to notify.

Answer 4

Looked good.

Answer 5

That sure sounds good..

Answer 6

it is fine.