the last time i see her is in a few hours. she is casually dating someone else but likes me too.
A trade of distant bodies
for binding emotions
forgetting in time
the true deception
of appearance
silver light dangles
under a dark sky
footprints of my former self
washed away
will I wake some morning
with the daylight of trust
filling til I feel fulfilled
with no mountains
mothering me in their breasts
next to you
I’d awaken with poetry
pouring out of my pours
and never ask for more
the rain of truth
makes my face cold
and a thousand lovers
cannot warm me
I trace the difference
between trust and truth
unborn pink sky
sun rises in my eyes
misleading weather
turns to deliver tears
mourning moments
murdered by caution
our lives contained
only the strongest strands
strung together
won't fall to nothing
2006-12-18 11:33:11 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i love it..it's very good..it's until and not til..pores though not pours..but it's very nice! if you wrote that, kudos to you!
2006-12-18 11:38:50 · answer #1 · answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uh, thats fairly lame dude... But on the plus side, you'll never see her again, so you don't have to worry about looking like a fool!
2006-12-18 19:36:40 · answer #2 · answered by Steve-o 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwwww....that is such a lovely poem!!!!!!! so lovely that you have to make sure that this girl deserves such loveliness....if u know deep in ur heart that she is the right girl for you....read her that poem....and trust...even if she's not digging you...u'll have her thinkin....maybe....
but if you don't think she's worth it...pleeease save ur poem for a better person.
2006-12-18 19:38:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋