how can you offer home
to a stranger unknown
with no map to find
the peaks of the mind
and valleys of the heart
where do you start
to glow and ascend
will purity transcend
when the concrete invades
and an abstraction fades
depression was a season
before she gave me reason
to keep connection
in this human collection
Now, I intellectualize
feelings that have no eyes
can a gift stay alive
can kindness still thrive
on the end of this vine
nothing to be mine
but only for once see
filtered eyes set free
2006-12-17 09:51:26 · 8 answers · asked by rhiannon_kc 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
yes i actually do. interesting rhyme and very well put words. i like it. congrats.i like the last part best
2006-12-17 09:56:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!
Good job!How old are you?
i like hte first 8 lines the best....
its pretty spiffy what you got there!!
2006-12-17 17:54:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good! job! i write poems too! my little sis is 12 and she has some of hers published in a book!
2006-12-17 18:20:35 · answer #3 · answered by ILUVBOO-BEAR! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its beautiful! I too am a poet and one day... I'll too share, keep doing what your doing!
2006-12-17 17:59:31 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, very creative :D!
2006-12-17 17:54:43 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
:B I got buck teeth!
2006-12-17 17:54:35 · answer #6 · answered by eddievanhalen11111 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dat is good
2006-12-17 18:05:04 · answer #7 · answered by nintendo8888 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is nice...
2006-12-17 17:53:56 · answer #8 · answered by Promise 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋