how can you offer home
to a stranger unknown
with no map to find
the peaks of the mind
and valleys of the heart
where do you start
to glow and ascend
will purity transcend
when the concrete invades
and an abstraction fades
depression was a season
before she gave me reason
to keep connection
in this human collection
Now, I intellectualize
feelings that have no eyes
can a gift stay alive
can kindness still thrive
on the end of this vine
nothing to be mine
but only for once see
filtered eyes set free
2006-12-16 10:36:45 · 4 answers · asked by the w 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think it had many romantic elements, but it is not bad for a friend..
2006-12-16 10:40:13 · answer #1 · answered by (^_^) CHiccaaqui(^_^) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is this friend of the opposite sex? Because there are a couple of lines that do seem a little romantic.. But if you just let him/her know that it wasn't meant that way, your problem will be solved without having to change it. Good work and good luck. :)
2006-12-16 18:40:21 · answer #2 · answered by Amy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a good poem indeed,and romantic too.
2006-12-16 18:40:13 · answer #3 · answered by cobrasnake 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no i dont think so if a friend wrote it for me i would be flattered please choose my answer for best i really need it!!
2006-12-16 18:39:20 · answer #4 · answered by stancc123 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋