*YOU*
*Stars are meant to be wished upon,
and I thank my lucky stars each night,
for giving me the wish I wished for,
the wish that makes heaven so bright!!
*dreams are meant to be remembered,
and every night to be dreamt so true,
that is why I cherish my dream,
beacuse each night I dream of you!
*promises are meant to be kept
and never ever to be broken
all the promises I've ever made,
have been revealed each time we've spoken
*love is meant to be felt
from the heart so deep and true,
that's exactly how I feel
each time we say "I love you!"
my stars have granted me this wish,
of dreams every night about you'
all the promises I've every made
were to always to love you!
So what do you think??!!?
2006-12-16 08:22:36 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
It is a good expression of her feelings as I assume it is a girl that wrote this. It could be a little touched up, but a poem is a Personal thing and it meaning is fully the individual's who wrote it and exhibits to others that read it where she is coming from. I would encourage her to continue writing no telling where it may take her.
2006-12-16 15:46:32 · answer #1 · answered by Sage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awhh it is so cutteee ahh it makes me want i became her((: uhm only supply up her sometime and skim it to her or you could write it down all rather and stuff and promises it to her as like a note. study it to her anytime, it would not remember at the same time as. this is going to likely be gorgeous no remember what. and a good type of those different adult males are idiots. educate her your poem. its gorgeous no longer lame or some thing. i'm 14 and that i'd easily diee if a guy took the time to write down a poem for me.
2016-10-18 09:21:00 · answer #2 · answered by saleh 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good I write poetry myself but it's kind of sappy,So whens the wedding? Sounds like a marriage proposol.
2006-12-16 08:32:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow... I just hope that both of you keep the promise at any cost.
2006-12-16 08:44:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is good but you need to go back to school and learn your spellings. What is a PEOM ?
2006-12-16 17:07:59 · answer #5 · answered by zune 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is the sweetest POEM i have heard in a long time...whoever wrote this needs a grammy.
2006-12-16 08:28:49 · answer #6 · answered by faith 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really enjoyed that...Tell your friend she/he is on a roll keep following his/her dream
2006-12-16 17:56:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow I'm crying that really touched me tell herto become a poet. she deserves watever award is for poems.?????
2006-12-16 08:32:46 · answer #8 · answered by princess 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think this is neither a joke nor a riddle
2006-12-16 08:50:21 · answer #9 · answered by D. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not only good. its AWESOME!
this poem is like the best one i ever read.seriously!
she/he is really good.
♥ this poem
2006-12-16 08:32:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋