Ok check out my lyrics and tell me if you like them.
Mother and father had to work 3 jobs they would come home at noon. They would give me a kiss and then tell me good-bye while I said I love you. So now im sittin here wonderin what i was here for, but all along i knew, all needed was you. Now you make me feel at home, you make me understand, why i was born on this earth, to prodly take a stand. So now i gotta say that all i wanted was you, but now that ive waited all my life I relized you need me to. Last week i saw you at the county fair waiting in line for a ride, I was up on stage singin a song bout a big change in my life. How your tore a hole in it by tellin me good-bye, saying were never goin make it but now im here you think that twice. So i just wanted you to know you were the onley love of my life, so how does that make you feel, i could have been your wife. So now im sittin here wonderin what i was here for, but all along i knew all needed was you. Now you make me feel at home you make me understand why i was born on this earth to prodly take a stand. So now i gotta say, that all i wanted was you but now that ive waited all my life I relized you need me to. Remember that cold September when you said we were done, My heart fell down to 30' a my hands went numb. Did I do something wrong? help me understand. If i did please tell me so then i wouldnt feel as bad.So now im sittin here wonderin what i was here for, but all along i knew, all needed was you. Now you make me feel at home, you make me understand, why i was born on this earth, to prodly take a stand. So now i gotta say that all i wanted was you, but now that ive waited all my life I relized you need me to.
2006-12-14 12:05:31 · 6 answers · asked by Shelby 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
you know, that was pretty nice. Maybe not a song to some people, but then again, only you would know the rhythm and how it goes. And you took out time and effort to write it. I'm into creativity and poetry, all that good stuff. I really liked it, so you have my vote!
Krazy Libra
2006-12-14 12:10:29 · answer #1 · answered by krazy_libra_from_ac 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really do not care what others say--I say what I like and I liked it--in fact--I loved it. Keep up the good work. Don't let others destroy you and creativity.
2006-12-14 20:19:34 · answer #2 · answered by old_woman_84 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was cool. next time you may to separate it out so that it doesn't read as one whole paragraph, but it was cool.
but why did you post it on answers, you may see someone singing it on american idol claiming it is an original.
2006-12-14 20:18:18 · answer #3 · answered by Smoove 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep your other job!
2006-12-14 20:09:31 · answer #4 · answered by SoSpecial 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
trash
2006-12-14 20:07:14 · answer #5 · answered by jac 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no stop it
2006-12-14 20:06:53 · answer #6 · answered by J-Dub 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋