So I wrote a poem for my Aunt please let me know if you like it.
Many years have come and gone
and I miss you like crazy
Everyday thinkin' about
would I ever see you again?
Mom Kept me from seeing you
and I don't understand why.
All those years without you here.
I just wanted to cry.
I missed you and needed you
to be in my life
I was kept far away
you were removed from my sight.
I found you at last
and it has changed my world.
I love you so much
and I always will.
Now that your found
I don't ever wanna let you go
cause' I need you in my life
please just stay with me.
I missed you and needed you
to be in my life
I was kept far away
you were removed from my sight.
you were removed from my sight.
By Ashley Heslop
2006-12-14 12:04:13 · 8 answers · asked by Ashley 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
I wrote this because for 8 years I was taken out of her life. I am 15 so you do the math. I just reconnected with her on Sunday at my grandmas funeral so out of something sad came something very happy.
2006-12-14 12:13:06 · update #1
You may use it but please don't use it as your own.
2006-12-14 12:15:22 · update #2
The poem is deep. It looks good, so keep up the good work
2006-12-14 15:57:56 · answer #1 · answered by Sir CJ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was so sweet I might just send that to my aunt. I give u a 10!!!
2006-12-14 20:11:42 · answer #2 · answered by Janee M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it! It's touching, and I think your aunt will love it. It will probably make her cry. It's really good! You are a great writer!
2006-12-14 20:08:12 · answer #3 · answered by Damon ♥ Elena 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very nice poem.
2006-12-14 20:07:01 · answer #4 · answered by mamabear 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thumbs up, very nice
2006-12-14 20:06:55 · answer #5 · answered by thoughts_in_a_blender 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow. that is so sweet. DAMN i'm impressed. on a scale from one to ten i'll give u a million lol.
2006-12-14 20:06:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. maybe you can vary your words a little
2006-12-14 20:09:22 · answer #7 · answered by imcool 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE IT,way to go,this poem is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO nice,i love it so much,mind if i copy it.
2006-12-14 20:08:07 · answer #8 · answered by calilove143 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋