Need of more nationwide efforts for teenagers should be recognized, not to leave them being overlooked anymore.
My MicrosoftWord keeps saying it's wrong and I am totally confused. Is it wrong or right? If it's wrong,, what is the correct one?
2006-12-14 09:52:48 · 8 answers · asked by melong_91 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
sorry about that
I am not good at English so I am having hard time.
What I am trying to say is
Although there has been lots of nationwide efforts to prevent identity theft it did not have much effect on teenagers. Teenagers are though the most vulnerable ones and are being overlooked because most people think the elderly are the number one target.
2006-12-14 10:21:27 · update #1
"should be recognized" uses a passive voice. The sentence is out of context, so it is hard to deceifer it...how about
It is necessary to recognize the need for more nationwide efforts for teenagers. Failure to do so will simply leave them as they are now; overlooked.
2006-12-14 10:20:54 · answer #1 · answered by saopaco 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The need of more nationwide efforts for teenagers should be recognized as their problems are always overlooked.
Something like that?
2006-12-14 18:31:39 · answer #2 · answered by Martha P 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that this would be a better way to write this sentence:
More nationwide efforts for teenagers should be recognized instead of overlooked.
Hope that helps.
That is, if i understood your meaning correctly.
2006-12-14 18:01:16 · answer #3 · answered by Dancer101 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
try "There is a major need of more nationwide effort for teenagers, neglecting it has to stop." or something. no offense, the sentence you wrote doesn't make sense, read it outloud yourself.
2006-12-14 18:03:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
You are missing the subject part of your sentence. After reading it I am not sure what you mean...so I would have to go with what Microsoft word is telling you that it is incorrect. Need more help...tell us what the subject content of the sentence is and we could help you rewrite it so it makes more sense. Good Luck!
2006-12-14 18:14:20 · answer #5 · answered by Tiggers 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Where do we start? I can't rewrite it, because it makes no sense. Sorry.
2006-12-14 17:57:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
yea its totally WRONG WRONG WRONG! WRONG WRONG WRONG WRONG!
what are u even talkign about, wat effort i wanna rephrase it but
it is nonsensical
2006-12-14 18:00:28 · answer #7 · answered by defenderof thehumanright 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
que?
2006-12-14 18:01:44 · answer #8 · answered by .::♥THATcupcake♥::. 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋