Ok... i need your opinion on this love letter. ASAP?

Question

This letter is for a girl, i really like, she knows i like her, i have told her many times before but i have done a few things that she has told me seemed freaky to her. Making a rose from paper, being overly nice to her, etc... I really do love her, but i'm not sure if she wants to hear that three worded phrase....do you reckon she will find this ok, or will she find it creepy? Preferably women to answer please, if not, then experienced guys.
START
Dear (name)

I know that I have creeped you out this past year. I am sorry about that. I am asking for your forgiveness.

I don't know what else to say. If loving you was wrong, well, then i don't want to be right.

Miss you always,

(my name)
FINISH

Also if you think its bad, make changes to it and give me a better love letter.

Answer 1

I think that she will find that a little bit creepy. but try this:
Dear (name)

I know that for the past year I have told you many times that I have liked you. I am sorry that if I bothered you, but I wanted to let you know how I truly feel about you. I am asking you to please forgive me, if I creeped you out this past year.

I don't know what else I could say, but I really do like you a lot and you are the only person that can make my heart beat slow and fast at the same time. When I am around you I am speechless and I find it hard to breathe when I am around you, because you take my breath away.

So if loving you was wrong, then honestly..I don't know want to be right.

Miss you always,

(my name)

Answer 2

well you said you did some things that freaked her out. It sounds like came on a little too strong. You may like her, but it sounds like she may not feel the same way about you. I'd try being friends first. That's a good way to get to know her and to get her to warm up to you a little and see that you aren't weird.
As for the letter, I would take you the"If loving you was wrong," part because it may freak her out. She doesn't really know you, and to most girls, having a guy you don't know tell you he loves you can freak you out. So, I'd try

Dear ____,

I know that I creeped you out this past year and I am really sorry about that. I hope that you can forgive me for this.

I don't know what else to say to change how you think about me, but I would like to be friends if that's possible. At least you'll get to know me for who I am and not what I did.

Your possible friend,
_______

of course you shouldn't copy exactly what i said, this is just some suggestions of some things that might not freak her out when she reads the letter. I did change the sign off because saying you miss her always sounds a little stalkerish and if she is already feeling weird then that wouldn't be something to say. Really, just be yourself but try not to come off as strong. Hope this helps!

Answer 3

I would go a different route with the love letter. The one you have so far is a little awkward and comes on too aggressive.
Dear (name),
For the past year I have enjoyed your company and the time we have spent together. During this time, I have become close to you and have begun to have feelings for you. I care about you very much and think of you often. I would honored if you would join me for dinner (time and place) so that I express my feeling to in person.
Truly,
(name)
Make sure you hand write this and give it to her in a nice envelope. If she doesn't respond to you, let her go. But whatever you do, don't tell her you love her yet. That will scare her off. I hope this helps you. Good luck!!!

Answer 4

Well, if she creeped out because you were telling those stuff, then, I wouln't mentioned them never again in her presence, but only when, and if, she ever starts to tell them to you first.

Now about the love letter... How about: on the envelope write
Read me! (without names or anything).
In the letter: before this paper reaches the bin, please read first...

To the dweller of my heart:
I am so sorry if I said something wrong... I now solemnly promise that I'll never do that again. I just want you to be happy. But, am I selfish if I want to think that your true happiness is in my hands?
I know that I drove you away with my words, but I simply don't know how to approach you... I get so insecure and nervous only because I'm scared to loose you. And what did I do?
I lost you...
Forgive me, please. The last thing I wanted to accomplish is to make you go away.
Only thing I wanted is to give me a chance. And I blew it. So, now I have the courage to ask for second one. But that's only because I am certain that I can put that beautiful smile on your face again, and that your so lively (the colour) eyes can't compare to every beam of the sun. I can make you feel like a goddess. But only if you let me to...

Others can fool you, and you will believe to their lies, and get hurt at the end.
Yes. Lies sound nice. Their lies can look so true.
Sorry for being only honest with you. And sorry if I'm not like others.
It's your call. Your decision. I won't bother you again if you refuse to be happy.
Your call only...
It's the perfect time to write : Yours truly...
But since I'm only true with my attentions, and not yours, at least not yet (hope never dies), perhaps its better to conclude this only with > Sincerely,truly and only YOURS, XXX



I wrote it the best I could. Please notify me in any case , if you choose my answer or not. I would like to know what happened.
GOODLUCK!

Answer 5

I don't know what's going on with the whole creeped out thing ur talking about at the beginning of the letter but yeah, I think I would leave that out...sounds kinda scary...

and if you don't know if she wants to hear 'I love you' then I wouldn't say it...either.

You could write her a letter saying that you are interested without coming on too strong. (Hint: Many people don't like it if someone comes on to them too strong and you might just scare her off.)

Write something simple and sweet and please refrain from this entire message because I know if I received it, the only letter I would have in response would be a restraining order.

Good luck:)

Answer 6

I think its okay, but it needs to be more from the heart. Try something like,
I'm sorry that I freaked you out this past year. I am sorry for that and I am asking your forgiveness.
I'm in love with you and it was the only way I knew how to get your attention. Now that I know you don't like it, I will try something else.
etc....
Just be honest with her and don't freak her out anymore. Ask her how she feels, if she would like to be in a serious relationship with you.
Good Luck.

Answer 7

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Answer 8

I would say don't write yoru love letter based on a song!!! That's kidn of lame. You should just write what your heart is telling you and what you're feeling. Try not to use 'love' inyour letter... that'll creep her out more.

Answer 9

I think you may just need to move on. Whether or not your letter is good won't make this girl like or dislike you. Perhaps stepping back and waiting for her to come to you--if she ever does--is a better option.

Answer 10

Say,
Please forgive me for becoming entranced in your presence, for I cannot help it as you have that effect on me. I will work harder in trying to not look at you or be nice to you or smile at you whenever you look my way. Could you do me a favor and stop looking so beautiful? Thank you very kindly.
If you have any questions, I'll be right here dreaming of how I can spoil you should you give me a chance.
Hopefully Yours (one day),
.....your name