Do you ever wonder
What world am I living under...
(Accoustic guitar plays)
My world took a drastic change
When you first came
The power that you've injected into me
Makes our love steady and impossible to change
(Chorus)
Oh girl,my sweet honey
I just wanna tell you
You're like my bittersweet chocolate
Brings me everlasting joy yet a little of harsh truth
But I still wanna proclaim to the world
That I will always love you....
Flowers shoot up from the cobblestones
You told me softly in a heavenly tone
That I was your Mr.Right
And a guy like me was really hard to find
I laughed and nodded my head twice
Telling you that you were really nice
(bridge)
And now we're inseparable
Our hearts bonding as one
May our love stay strong for eternity
Not anything can change it,not even money
You're my angel...baby
Your words warming my heart every minute
And now I only pray
For our burning passions for each other to stay...
"Amanda,I love you,til the seas dry up and the sun burns out."
2006-12-13 21:16:15 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Hi I wrote this song for my girlfriend Amanda..sorry if it's weird because I'm only 12 and my vocab is really limited,but please do leave some comments about it,thanks!
2006-12-13 21:17:05 · update #1
You liar, you aren't 12. I call bullpucky.
2006-12-13 21:19:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
You could do better, include more fitting words in it, words that make sense, like "Telling me im not alone, when you whisper to me in a heavenly tone..." instead of "Flowers shoot up from the cobblestones You told me softly in a heavenly tone" don't really make sense izzen it, although love itself does not make sense. Well done, man, for a 12 years old, you could do much better than this, im sure , just give your self time to grow up, and you will understand the feeling of love.
2016-05-24 00:56:19 · answer #2 · answered by Sandra 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Three Star rating
2006-12-13 21:21:24 · answer #3 · answered by Seagull 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
are you only 12 I think you still have alot to learn about love, but the song is very good.
2006-12-13 21:22:18 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's very sweet and if a guy wrote me a song, i would be very flattered. but, your so young. you can't possibly say that you will stay with this same girl forever.
2006-12-13 21:23:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you write songs well. pretty good song lyrics you got here, and your only twelve. how sweet
2006-12-13 21:21:37 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If only we could hear the sound hey?
2006-12-13 21:19:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This stuff doesn't work in real life.
Sorry bud.
2006-12-13 21:19:15 · answer #8 · answered by Wisdom Guru 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
man u're too young to fall in love like this ... but i bet she'd like it.
2006-12-13 21:37:02 · answer #9 · answered by Tartlettes 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweet
2006-12-13 21:29:20 · answer #10 · answered by jjdd 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋