i gotta zero on my project can u help fix it?

Question

Dear People of the Earth,
You might be asking why I'm writing to you well it is because you are ruining me.How you ask by causing global warming but don't worry you can fix it its just as easy as not driving a car as much,not wasting electricity,recycling items,and planting trees.All these can help me.
Global warming doesn't just affect me it affects you too.One way it well affect you is you would have to draw new coastlines on maps because water expands as it is heated, and because oceans absorb more heat than land, sea levels around the world would rise.Also cities would flood.Another thing is temperate places that now receive frequent rain and snowfall might become hotter and drier. Inland lakes and rivers would shrink. Forest fires could occur more often. Frequent periods of drought would make it hard to raise crops for food. There would be less water available for drinking, showers, irrigation, even swimming pools.Something else that would happen is Plants and animals unable to take the heat may go extinct, and be replaced by heat-tolerant species.Hurricanes, tornadoes and other storms caused by changes in heat and water evaporation might occur more frequently and be more intense.
I am telling you this now because it has been getting worse in the past 14 years.I am scared that i might start to get covered by water.You should be scared to because if I get covered by water you well not be living.So please change this for me and you.

Sincerly,
The Land

i am suppose to be the land writing to the people of the earth about global warming and as soon as the teacher saw the first sentence he gave me a zero so HELP!!please!

Answer 1

Well, I for one found it a bit hard to follow, no offense. Was it on global warming in general? Did it have to be written like a letter from the land? Okay, so I think you could have found better, smoother grammar and sentences. Imagine your friend says "Dude, what's so bad about global warming?" and explain it in your paper similar to how you explain it by speaking. And you could have found more fancy looking facts and big words, idk, I don't know what the project was, do you?

Answer 2

I am already clearly aware of global warming, as are many other people. I am taking action for global warming problems, as I realize the danger.

However, everyone realizes the effects of global warming, but they choose to ignore it. You're right, something must be done.

Don't worry: I'll help out in reducing the effects of global warming.

Answer 3

Good try...

You only forgot one thing...
You are talking to selfish...greedy...stupid people.

And it is too late anyway.
The problem cannot be fixed.

In order to reverse it and get back where we were 40 years ago...you would need to live with zero pollution for 40 years.
This is simply not possible.

By doing the things that you are talking about...we can stop it getting worse...but the problem we have now will remain the same.