hello, I am not native English speaker so I am having hard time
making up some sentences. please make correction if it's wrong
thank you
Although there are lots of softwares that help protect teenagers against the crime, they are the only ones who can protect themselves completely.
2006-12-13 13:00:08 · 8 answers · asked by melong_91 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Here is the corrected sentence:
Although there are many types of software that help protect teenagers against crime, teenagers are the only ones who can protect themselves completely.
2006-12-13 13:09:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although there is lots of software to help protect teenagers against crime, they are the only ones who can completely protect themselves.
2006-12-13 21:04:20 · answer #2 · answered by Warren914 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although there's a lot of software that can help protect teenagers against crime, these are the the only ones that can protect themselves completely.
2006-12-13 21:03:47 · answer #3 · answered by kristina43 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Although there is a lot of software available to protect teenagers against internet crime, only they can protect themselves completely.
2006-12-13 21:05:14 · answer #4 · answered by misstikal311 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am thinking that you want to correct:
Although there are lots of softwares that help protect teenagers against the crime, they are the only ones who can protect themselves completely.
I might suggest:
Although there are many software programs to protect teenagers against the crime, the teens are ultimately responsible for their own protection.
2006-12-13 21:05:23 · answer #5 · answered by rileysmile 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I suggest: "Although there is a variety of software on the market protecting teenagers from crime, ultimately they are the only ones who can protect themselves." It's sort of a big change, but it provides much emphasis to it.
2006-12-13 21:03:32 · answer #6 · answered by bibliomaniac15 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although there is plenty of software that helps to protect teenagers against criminals, they are still ultimately responsible for protecting themselves.
2006-12-13 21:05:24 · answer #7 · answered by wild_angel_greeneyes_f44 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Although there is lots of software that helps protect teenagers against crime, ..."
"Software" should be pluralized more like a "stuff" word than a "things" word. (Like "sand" vs "blocks"). "The crime" implies only one criminal act. "Crime" by itself would refer to the general phenomena of crime and can be used to refer to a collective variety of crimes even if the statement does not refer to all the possible varieties of crime in the world.
I hope that explanation wasn't too clumsy. :)
2006-12-13 21:09:16 · answer #8 · answered by John's Secret Identity™ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋